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Winter Wane

thousand butterflies flutter around freedom gained ... tender soothing sun fragrant breeze enters the weddings of lights and shades ... uninvited guest? buds smiling dancing dream of their adolescence ... aware of fading dewdrops roll and fall flower faces feel free for ... buzzing honey bees spring seems peeping through windows of seasonal shifts ... costumed to perform 11 February 2022

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Nancy Kaufman

Date: 2/19/2022 6:55:00 AM

I love you're imagery. It's magical.

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/14/2022 3:47:00 PM

Love the Hakius Christuraj, "Buds smiling dancing". Can't wait until spring. Blessings ~ Debra

Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/16/2022 8:18:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/14/2022 6:54:00 AM

Congratulations for these great Haiku! We'll done :)

Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/14/2022 7:16:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 2/13/2022 8:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Christuraj. Beautiful Haiku. Take care. Shirley

Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/13/2022 10:01:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2022 8:46:00 PM

a lovely portrayal of spring's coming, Chris and i see it's a contest winner, so Congrats.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/13/2022 10:01:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Bill Baker

Date: 2/12/2022 11:22:00 PM

Excellent, well-written Haiku, Christuraj. Congratulations on the win. "winter wane" was so thorough. You exposed us to a new scene in each verse. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/13/2022 7:23:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/12/2022 7:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "winter wane" is a beautiful write. I would love to see your "thousand butterflies." I love them. Hope you are OK. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend................

Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/13/2022 7:23:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Frederic Parker

Date: 2/11/2022 1:27:00 PM

you have a gift for creating beautiful pictures with your poetry

Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/13/2022 7:23:00 AM

Thank you very much.

John Read

Date: 2/11/2022 12:06:00 AM

Roll on summer it's so cold in London this morning' Enjoyed reading your poem Christuraj.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/11/2022 2:04:00 AM

Thank you very much.