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Winter Throes - Ws

in cold winter throes city has frosted over ~ light shimmers on pristine snow parka covered kids toss snowballs at each other ~ living within a snow globe 9th January 2023 For Charles Messina's "Winter Sedoka" contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2023 6:17:00 AM

I wanted to drop by to say congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2023 1:16:00 PM

SO cute!! Big congrats, Jo

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/25/2023 7:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Jo! :)

Charles Messina

Date: 1/25/2023 5:46:00 AM

Simply lovely, Jo. I loved this! Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest. Hugs Charlie

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/13/2023 7:49:00 PM

Very picturesque, Jo, it does remind me of a snowglobe! Best wishes for the contest~

W J Clarke

Date: 1/12/2023 2:05:00 PM

Really lovely Jo! I really like the last line "living in a snowball".

Fj Thomas

Date: 1/9/2023 12:32:00 PM

Nice Jo! I especially like how the final line in the second katauta encompasses the whole first. And thank you for commenting on mine, I wasn't happy with it so I removed it this morning. Still working on my Winter sedoka!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2023 9:59:00 AM

This is so charming

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/9/2023 5:12:00 AM

Wonderful images you convey throughout, Jo. I like the turn your poem takes towards the ending line. Best to you.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/9/2023 2:57:00 AM

Love your winter imagery Jo, good luck in the contest and enjoy your week ahead. Tom