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WINTER SOULSCAPE-POTD

dark, grim sky and soul lone crow, flys all alone rain wet, liquid coal       1-3-2021       6pm PST         POTD. January 5, 2021

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Date: 1/13/2021 3:46:00 PM
'liquid coal' -- I like that one a lot, Pangie. Belated congrats on POTD ~ Sleepy Raven
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Date: 1/14/2021 3:34:00 AM
So glad, Raven you found this. I'd be willing to erase all my poetry for this one! Thank you for acknowledging this. Pangie
Date: 1/8/2021 9:36:00 PM
Pangie, a big wow for this haiku! Your poetic expression is growing all the time, this one is so soulful and the imagery of the lone crow is doubly dark. 'Liquid coal' really sticks out as an original and evocative phrase. You should be very proud of your talent. Going in my faves, and a big congrats for your POTD! Hugs ~ John
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Date: 1/9/2021 3:59:00 PM
Holy Guacamole! Going in your FAVS. A double thank you.I am glad you see me growing, I hope to pen more like this. Life does not have to be all about happy Haikus, I am sure. But ..how this one came to me is out of the realm of my understanding, thats fine.))) My poetry is undergoing a sizzling transformation, IMHO...few will notice it with the depth you have I feel I am on a Starship, headed in a nouveau Direction in another galaxy, Pangie Thank you
Date: 1/8/2021 3:19:00 PM
This poem touches the depth of my spirit. The grim sky with the solo crow is quite an image. Liquid coal brings more thoughts to dwell on. It can mean so much to different people. Congratulations on POTD. Madelyn McKay
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Date: 1/9/2021 3:43:00 PM
Hi Madelyn...glad you caught the power, this one can be interpreted in many ways. After I wrote it, I doubted posting it, but had tbe strange sense it was a winner. And so...it was. Is my Fav poem I ever wrote, I have grown weary of long, poetry. It no longer moves me. It's great to get a POTD.but one must keep exploring new forms! Be well, my friend! PANAGIOTA
Date: 1/6/2021 12:47:00 PM
WoW! Panagiota, What a deep poem with stellar imagery and content. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Happy New Year:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/8/2021 2:49:00 PM
Sorry Alexis for Late Reply, I am so glad you caught the originality of his haiku. It's far from ordinary. I can tell yo have a deep soul.)) this was a great way to start the New Year, with friends lime you.... Thank you....Pangie
Date: 1/6/2021 8:22:00 AM
An ominous haiku, lovely done. Congratulations on POTD Panagiota, xomo
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Date: 1/6/2021 8:45:00 AM
Hi Maureen~ the Haiku hit me suddenly. I don't see it as ominous but we poets each see things, differently, right? HNY, by the way~ have days of joyM Pangie..
Date: 1/5/2021 10:24:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Panagiota. The movie The Crow with Brandon Lee came to mind after reading. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Have a great week :) ~Angie
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Date: 1/6/2021 4:33:00 AM
Hi Angela~ golly, never saw that movie!! Thank you for the response!! Wishing you a miraculous week. Pangie
Date: 1/5/2021 9:38:00 PM
Congrats on your POTD Panagiota..., just now read it... great images with this short poem.. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 1/6/2021 4:30:00 AM
Anitha, oh, so glad you caught the imagery. Thank you for commenting Pangie
Date: 1/5/2021 8:25:00 PM
Like a painting, Pangie! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 1/5/2021 8:23:00 PM
Panagiota, congratulations on POEM OF THE DAY with this deep write, short and beautiful -Constance
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Date: 1/6/2021 4:26:00 AM
Constance, sorry for late response. How sweet of You to visit. I love your description of this. Wonderfully said.)) Pangie
Date: 1/5/2021 5:41:00 PM
Congrats on POTD
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Date: 1/5/2021 6:51:00 PM
Merci.
Date: 1/5/2021 5:24:00 PM
Pangie, absolutely beautiful, and congratulation on potd
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Date: 1/5/2021 6:57:00 PM
Hi Akkina, exactly! It is beautiful. I hesitated on posting this but knew in my poetic soul, it had depth. So Really surprised today to see it as a POTD. Bless you, Pangie.
Date: 1/5/2021 12:42:00 PM
My favorite a rhyming haiku, with cadence and stark meaning, more than deserved POTD Panagiota, upgrade to POTW, please, cheers David
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Date: 1/5/2021 8:23:00 PM
Be careful Panagiota my poems might get you down, can be very fatalistic irreverent and blunt at times, cheers David
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Date: 1/5/2021 6:50:00 PM
Be still my heart....I love rhyming Sedokus )))) How absolutely sweet of you to suggest this be a POTW, David. You must be some Poet to catch the cadence and the on purpose starkness. Adding you to my to follow list. You understand me. Poetry is far more than Norman Vincent Peale. Its a wide world..,Though I like those as well...wrote thousands of uplifting poems. Pangie
Date: 1/5/2021 12:27:00 PM
Oh my !! Your description of Winter is dark and dreary. I know the cold chill changes our countenance. Perhaps I see things differently, as Winter is a Wonderful season to embrace- in its own way of course. Congratulations Panagiota, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 1/5/2021 6:42:00 PM
Its meant to show the other face of winter. It really is a mood evoker far beyond Frosty the the snowman. Ching Ching LOL. Both are valid. I don't walk about thinking this. The haiku just hit me. Honestly, Brandy, I have 18 pages Of woo- Hoo poetry. Shakespeare wrote Hamlet, hardly a ha ha work. But he was quiets a varied poet. It's how a Poem is constructed that counts plus nuances. This has nuance.glad to find a new Poet side in me....)) thank you,,,,,Pangie
Date: 1/5/2021 12:17:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d. Pangie :) - Happy New Year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/5/2021 7:12:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise, truly this a Happy New Year. I am excited you took time to stop By today. Thank you for doing so. Pangie
Date: 1/5/2021 10:20:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, yes that is one way to describe winter. It is a mild day here today. Hugs xx Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/6/2021 7:44:00 AM
Hello Pagnaiota, okay go get some rest. Winter has its good side and bad. Hugs Darlene xx
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Date: 1/5/2021 6:31:00 PM
Darlene! It's a powerful way to describe it, I think, I am glad you commented, not feeling well. Excuse the late response, was asleep and not feeling good. Take care, my friend,,, Pangie
Date: 1/5/2021 9:41:00 AM
Well done.
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Date: 1/5/2021 9:59:00 AM
Rob, thank you. I was more than satisfied with this...so grateful you liked it. It's different than the haikus I have written in the past. Pangie
Date: 1/5/2021 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. ~~
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Date: 1/5/2021 9:56:00 AM
Vitot! Appreciate your words, hope you are feeling better These days! Pangie
Date: 1/5/2021 7:51:00 AM
Awesome Haiku Panagiota mou, very proud of my Greek sis who got POTD - Congratulations, hope you enjoy your day dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/5/2021 9:54:00 AM
Yes, I agree, it is awesome, Jennifer mou. Believe me ...I am loving this day, dear sis. Hope you are too! Hugs from the USA, Pangie.
Date: 1/5/2021 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Few words with much said. Come on Spring. Enjoy your win. Today, have joy/blessings..........................
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Date: 1/5/2021 9:51:00 AM
Hi Paula..,will obey and follow your advice. Thank you for taking time to comment. As you said...Come on Spring.. No confetti but have a horn to blow... Pangie
Date: 1/5/2021 6:44:00 AM
Yes... Pangie Art...Love the imagery and feeling...Congratulations Panagiota Ramios on POTD.
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Date: 1/5/2021 9:47:00 AM
Love to hear from you,,,thank you for so doing, I wish I could write more of these..haikus can be anything, This one I felt power in....)) Accepting your congratulations, Arturo Pangie
Date: 1/5/2021 4:11:00 AM
A wonderful haiku Pangie, love the dark imagery and congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 1/5/2021 6:17:00 AM
Tania, hello and thank you. The seasons provide pictures to draw from and a range of emotions. Thank you for appreciating the dark imagery. It's not my forte. But I see a new side to write about. Thank you. Pangie
Date: 1/5/2021 2:11:00 AM
a superb picture painted in so few words, many congrats Pangie:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/5/2021 6:12:00 AM
Jan, thank you. I know what a palette of words you have ans images to paint great pictures. I will celebrate today! Pangie
Date: 1/5/2021 1:28:00 AM
Back with congrats Pangie on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/5/2021 6:09:00 AM
Dear Tom~ this haiku, is my best. If anyone wants to see my others..that are about other topics, there are 18 pages of poetry to read I have completed, some, I should repost.i have been at PS 19 months, I think. Pangie
Date: 1/4/2021 3:08:00 PM
very descriptive!
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Date: 1/5/2021 6:19:00 AM
Hey, thanks my friend, Pangie
Date: 1/4/2021 8:31:00 AM
Wow! A masterpiece! You are describing the Northwest perfectly. A Fav! Love Chantelle
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Date: 1/4/2021 8:40:00 AM
I must be the crow in your area,))) Pangie Merci for the FAV. Thought you were not on line
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