Premiere Contest WinnerWinter Sonata - POTD

Winter Sonata 11-29-23
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Winter Sonata

In grave allegro solo grey gathers,
Strings of winter fantasias
Brewing staccatos of frozen fall remnants,
Downbeats for the first movement
As shivering sleet wipes away bucolic barcarolles
Rocking on sapphire barges,
Harbingers of hoarfrost and hibernation,
When leafless boughs conduct the opening motif
To summon deepening darkness
From restrained shadows of turbulence
To beat warnings on frosted windows
Of snug dens – sheltered hallows.

Sweet solstice flutes sing adagio
Then scatter crystalline mists across snow packed paths
In the movement pathetique when sunglow
Glides between aspen,
Ankle deep in fleecy billows,
Sugar flakes flutter in Heaven’s perfect pitch
Rhythmic silent rests hypnotize crisp midnights
When fluttering flakes of dreamy andantes
Ride on melodic cantabile whispers
In flurries of fleecy decrescendos
Spells of codas, enthralled by idle snowfall,
Glitter in lyric tinsel of sparkling crystal beads on twigs. 

Movement presto crescendos in frenzied storms
Snowfall pizzicatos fall in descending measures
When rondos of wind song ensembles
Ascend in frigid notes of icy scales
That pirouette in pulsing beats with resonate strings
Plucked by boreas in thundersnows percussions,
Vivace mistrals whirl in powdery ghosts  
That spin in tremolo trills of icicles, 
And in whiteout scherzos of blizzard sonatas,
Dizzy with solstice frosty fevers
As winter’s thundering cadence modulates 
Into vernal sighs of resolution.
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Ricci Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 11:08 AM
Hello Sam. Hi. You chose well with the free verse. I very much found this entry to be in true poetic vintage style voice and tone too. Be proud of your execution in its entirety starting with the poetic title. Thank you for sharing your skilled poetic talent. This is one to be read out loud with emphasis and feeling. Have a wonderful weekend. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
B. Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 1:37 PM
A belated congratulations on your win, my friend. A glorious poem! I really enjoyed your amazing creativity.. Your talent certainly shines, Sam! Many blessings to you and Happy New Year!
Gasun Avatar
December 25, 2023 at 9:08 PM
I'm so late to come for a visit and to read this excellent winter poem my dearest poet friend Sam, sorry. I got sick from Dec 8 to 12 then students' final exam followed when I went back to work. My big warmth Congrats on your well-deserved trophy win and POTD! Thanks for sharing. May I also greet you a very Merry Christmas! Wishing you all the BEST that the season has to offer. This occasion and this coming year, may you and your family/loved be gifted with countless God's blessings! Hugs,hugs
George Avatar
December 16, 2023 at 5:52 AM
I missed seeing this as POTD as I spend very little time on Poetry Soup...these days. So I am once again here to congratulate you on a double victory... This beautiful poem being the trophy winner and POTD. Celebrate your double win.... dear friend.
One Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 2:20 PM
Congratulations on your first place in the winter sonata contest
Agustin Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 8:17 PM
Wow! Congratulations! Your expertise in music is showcased here. Thanks for sharing you musical talent and poetic skill. God bless you.
Kauffman Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 11:56 AM
Beata, my heartfelt gratitude for your beautiful message of congratulations! This was a wonderful theme for both a musician and a lover of winter! Thank you for your lovely note. Sending you Christmas blessings of joy!
Brul Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 3:49 PM
It was so difficult for me to judge this Winter Sonata Contest as there were so many excellent entries but sigh I need to select just 10. But this masterpiece resonates with me and it caught my heart to a different dimension . Thank you Sam for serenading me this exceptional sonata of love. Congratulations on your trophy win!
Kauffman Avatar
December 15, 2023 at 11:52 AM
JCB, I am so thrilled that this poem sang to you . As one musician to another I believe we share a deep sense of the wonder and power of music! Indeed, there were amazing entries. I know you carefully considered each one! Truly difficult decisions! Your contest theme was magnificent. I am deeply honored by this trophy win. Not only did the theme reach into my musical soul but I have to admit I do love winter. What a combination - music and winter. So grateful for your placement and for this contest. Truly inspirational. Blessings of joy and gratitude to you!
Brul Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 4:25 PM
And congratulations on your POTD,too!
Evans Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 10:11 AM
Double congratulations, Sam! I could hear the orchestra playing your sonata. Superb!
Kauffman Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 11:02 AM
Thank you so much for your "double congratulations!" They are like the joy of music for me today - a beautiful melody and sonata of happy "notes!" And, knowing your love for music as a musician adds an extra happy lyric to your lovely message! Gratitude and blessings to you!
Poet Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 9:11 AM
Dear Sam, your poem is a magnificent orchestration of language and exquisite verse, capturing the essence of winter's splendor and brutality with remarkable artistry. Your win in the contest is undeniably warranted a testament to your exceptional skill and the profound sentiment and imagery woven into your composition. Allow me to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved accolades, both the prestigious Poem of the Day honor and the triumphant acquisition of the contest trophy.
Kauffman Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 10:57 AM
Dear Lasaad, I am deeply grateful for your heartwarming note of congratulations! Thank you! This poem is very special to me on many levels - as a poet, a musician and one who loves so many aspects of winter. It was a true joy to combine all in this poem as I reveled in going deeply into winter's sonata. I am so honored by its first place win and the POTD as there are wonderful poems on the winners list! Sending you blessings and gratitude, dear friend!
Rodgers Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 7:40 AM
Sam, your poem is a masterful symphony of words, painting a vivid and evocative picture of winter’s beauty and harshness. Your win in the contest is well-deserved, reflecting your exceptional talent and the depth of emotion and imagery in your work. Congratulations! - Daniel
Kauffman Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 10:37 AM
Daniel, my heartfelt gratitude for your "symphony" of beautiful compliments. I am deeply grateful for your message of congratulations and now, knowing your background, (just read your bio)your message takes on an added depth of joy. Your musical journey is so similar to mine. I had fun putting this poem together to mirror the three movements of a sonata, creating the musical images of winter. Thank you again for your congratulations! Blessings to you!
Empress Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 7:00 AM
Dearest sam, double congratulations on this poem, receiving not just potd but also first place in the winter sonata contest. Well deserved, keep shining, keep sharing always.
Kauffman Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 10:10 AM
Dearest Inky, your words of congratulation are like music to my heart. Thank you not only for your lovely message but for your beautiful "notes" of support and the time you take to thoughtfully comment. That means so much to me. And I revel in being able to call you friend. As a musician and poet this theme operated on so many additional levels for me. Thank you for sharing in my song of winter in three movements! My gratitude and blessings of joy to you. You give so much to PS not only with your commenting but the many ways you share your amazing poetic artistry!
Watt Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 10:37 PM
Dear Samba, my favorite musician-poet strikes again with yet another symphony of euphonic sounds and delightful seasonal imagery. I love "Sweet solstice flutes sing adagio" and "When rondos of wind song ensembles" among many other delicate, delicious, and dulcet lines. Also love the modulation and resolution to vernal sighs. Pure loveliness. I meant to wish you a happy birthday yesterday but got waylaid... hope it was as enjoyable to you as your poetry is to me. Congrats on your POTD for this charming sonata... a Fav for me. December blessings from your R&R Bro
Kauffman Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 11:12 AM
Dear friend, a heartfelt thank you coming to you in "measures" of grateful happiness! Knowing the musician that is you makes your message a beautiful symphony of delights! What a melodious blessing that plays repeatedly in my heart and through the lyrics of my day modulating joy and resolving in thankfulness. And, birthday greetings are never late! So appreciate your thoughtfulness. Looking forward to sending you birthday wishes in a few days. Two candles to go in the song of Advent. Sending you blessings of Advent light in the darkness!
Miller Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 8:58 AM
Truly brilliant poetry Sam, congrats on POTD
Kauffman Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 11:14 AM
Hi Terry! Heartfelt gratitude to you for your lovely note of congratulations. Thank you for sharing in this winter song! Blessings!
M  Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 1:51 PM
A very beautiful poem Sam! Congratulations on POTD! Cheers…Debx
Proxenos Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 12:59 PM
You are truly gifted Sam Kauffman, your poetry intense to the point and beyond this word, supercalifragilisticexpialidocious. Congratulations on POTD, hope you enjoyed the honor bestowed upon you my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2023 at 12:47 PM
- What a beautiful poem, Sam ... enjoy every line :) - Best wishes in the contest :) ... and congratulations on your p.o.t.d. - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 8:32 PM
This poem is magnificent and incredibly beautiful, Sam! Congratulations on POTD for this amazing poem. Have a blessed holiday season. :)
Nicole Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 6:58 PM
Sam, even though the wind brings a chill and the sun sets sooner this time of year, it's such a sensational season. Magical and spiritual, all at the same time. Like in this thought: "Sugar flakes flutter in Heaven’s perfect pitch." I'm in complete awe, my dear friend. Congratulations, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 3:33 PM
Congratulations on your exquisite poem receiving honour of POTD. So well-deserved - with dazzling images and superb choice of words, you have created a sonata, Dear Sam! I know you are a musician - the words related to musical compositions are skillfully used, making the poem an outstanding creation on all levels. Blessings, Love, Hugs ~ Mala
Kauffman Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 7:22 PM
Dearest Mala, thank you so much dear friend! What a joy to create a poem around music and winter. Have to admit I do love winter and to craft a poem around winter - creating a sonata - was an inexpressible joy! Had fun using the three movements of the sonata to shape the three different stanzas. I am so honored by the POTD -very special indeed! Sometimes we get to write a piece like Winter Sonata, and all of the hard work, learning and disappointments come together for us like music! I am so glad you enjoyed this winter musical interlude! Blessings, Love, Hugs!
Volumes Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 2:50 PM
Great to see your name up there Sam. This is an amazing Poem. Gives me winter chills reading it, and that's a mighty feat, considering its Summer here! A stellar accomplishment Sam, so well deserving of this acknowledgement. Best wishes from SV.
Anaya Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 2:50 PM
Dazzling use of the elements, choruses, snowy delights and a crispy white Winterlandia! Mesmerizing, written in pellucid prose Sam Kauffman. Congratulations on your POTD! Warm wishes~I Am Anaya
May Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 2:30 PM
Very nicely penned Sam, Congrats on POTD
Kauffman Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 5:15 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph! This was right up my alley as a musician and I had a wonderful time "composing" the lines. Sending you my gratitude and my blessings on the wings of a winter sonata!
Bowring Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 1:38 PM
Many congratulations Sam with your POTD - very poetic and incredibly well written. The poem is so descriptive with exquisite words ( need a dictionary for some I must confess) I especially love the line,’ Then scatter crystalline mists across snow packed paths’ - wonderful imagery throughout. Well done. An impressive write. Blessings to you .
Pandit Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 12:36 PM
BIG congrats on POTD, Sam. Superb write, as always. Enjoy your special day, today.
Kauffman Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 7:26 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay. Your congratulations honors this poem and you continue to inspire me with your writing, so rich in images, metaphor and poetic phrases. So grateful. It is, indeed, a special day with a special honor. Sending your my gratitude and blessings!!
Slaughter Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 10:49 AM
Love the ending, Sam. And the whole piece is musically exquisite...almost Vivaldian, in fact. Congrats on POTD, as well.
Kauffman Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 5:08 PM
Hi Jim! Thank you so much! Tickled that you picked up on the Vivaldi feeling of The Four Seasons as I could hear it running through my mind when writing this piece! It was fun to look at the traditional three movements of a sonata and use their tempos as part of each stanza! This contest theme is a musicians dream! If I remember correctly you are a musician! Sending you my gratitude for your congratulatory note and blessings!
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