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winter snooze

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December.2.2024

Haiku Poetry Contest

Sponsor. Rick Parise

snowflakes keep falling
under a white fluffy quilt~
the earth lies snoozing

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2024 11:00:00 PM

So cute, Valsa. Congrats

Crystol Woods

Date: 12/10/2024 10:55:00 AM

Love this! Winter snow are my favorite! Xo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/9/2024 7:56:00 AM

Very peaceful and picturesque! Congrats, Valsa!

Ink Empress

Date: 12/8/2024 11:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning placement sweet valsa! Well deserved! Nice to see you on winners list. Sending you light always

Karen Jones

Date: 12/8/2024 11:20:00 PM

Lovely haiku Valsa! Congratulations on your win!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 12/8/2024 7:46:00 PM

snooz.... lovely haiku. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

JCB Brul

Date: 12/4/2024 4:21:00 AM

What a lovely scene! I love the 3rd line description of earth snoozing. I will never see snow again the same way as I did before. Thank you dear Valsa. I enjoyed you excellent Haiku. Stay warm. ^__^ JCB

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/3/2024 3:52:00 PM

Snow so like a quilt. I love this metaphor. This is a lovely haiku.

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/3/2024 3:15:00 PM

Such a vivid and evocative Haiku! The chilly rest really lets everything take a break. I wish everyone emerges from this with a renewed sense of purpose. Warm hugs dearest friend.

Jay Narain

Date: 12/3/2024 10:45:00 AM

a GREAT HAIKU WITH VIVID IMAGERY.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/3/2024 4:33:00 AM

Very descriptive and expressive Haiku. The cold sleep gives most things a rest. I hope all resurface with a rejuvenated spirit. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 12/3/2024 3:29:00 AM

So beautiful and dreamy how you’ve describe snow and winter! So picturesque ! And the last line gives a very ethereal vibe to your haiku! “ the earth lies snoozing” beautiful pic to go with your haiku too dear sweet valsa! Youv nailed it! Well done! Best wishes for the contest: sending you light today and always. This is a fave for me