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December.2.2024

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winter snooze

snowflakes keep falling
under a white fluffy quilt~
the earth lies snoozing

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Andrea Dietrich

December 12, 2024 at 11:00 PM

So cute, Valsa. Congrats

Crystol Woods

December 10, 2024 at 10:55 AM

Love this! Winter snow are my favorite! Xo

Kim Rodrigues

December 9, 2024 at 7:56 AM

Very peaceful and picturesque! Congrats, Valsa!

Ink Empress

December 8, 2024 at 11:38 PM

Congratulations on your winning placement sweet valsa! Well deserved! Nice to see you on winners list. Sending you light always

Karen Jones

December 8, 2024 at 11:20 PM

Lovely haiku Valsa! Congratulations on your win!

thriveni c mysore

December 8, 2024 at 7:46 PM

snooz.... lovely haiku. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

JC Brul

December 4, 2024 at 4:21 AM

What a lovely scene! I love the 3rd line description of earth snoozing. I will never see snow again the same way as I did before. Thank you dear Valsa. I enjoyed you excellent Haiku. Stay warm. ^__^ JCB

Hilda Greenhough

December 3, 2024 at 3:52 PM

Snow so like a quilt. I love this metaphor. This is a lovely haiku.

Sotto Poet

December 3, 2024 at 3:15 PM

Such a vivid and evocative Haiku! The chilly rest really lets everything take a break. I wish everyone emerges from this with a renewed sense of purpose. Warm hugs dearest friend.

Jay Narain

December 3, 2024 at 10:45 AM

a GREAT HAIKU WITH VIVID IMAGERY.

Sara Kendrick

December 3, 2024 at 4:33 AM

Very descriptive and expressive Haiku. The cold sleep gives most things a rest. I hope all resurface with a rejuvenated spirit. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Ink Empress

December 3, 2024 at 3:29 AM

So beautiful and dreamy how you’ve describe snow and winter! So picturesque ! And the last line gives a very ethereal vibe to your haiku! “ the earth lies snoozing” beautiful pic to go with your haiku too dear sweet valsa! Youv nailed it! Well done! Best wishes for the contest: sending you light today and always. This is a fave for me