Winter Popsicles

Temperature falls Sunshine looses the battle Oranges encased in ice

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James Fraser

Date: 6/4/2009 2:51:00 PM

Clever write in this Haiku Barbara>James

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/19/2008 4:35:00 PM

this is a lovely haiku, nicely penned...Raul

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/16/2008 5:37:00 PM

I used to love popsicles as a kid... I haven't had one in ages. It's time to be a kid again! Best wishes, Keith

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 12/14/2008 11:16:00 AM

Wow, lovley haiku, My favorite form, love the scene you painted. Love Elizabeth

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 12/13/2008 4:19:00 AM

Lovely image and great title...made me chuckle this. Love, Nigel

Anna Mayall

Date: 12/10/2008 8:04:00 PM

nice.....anna

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/10/2008 6:19:00 PM

In the valley of Southern Calif where I grew up, that used to be a fear during winter nights...that the crop would freeze. Many a night would they light smudge pots out in the orchards, and the sky would be smoky, the pots would keep the fruit from freezing. This poem made me remember those old days. These days I think they use huge windmill type fans to keep the fruit from freezing. Well done Haiku~ Carrie