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Winter Monoku

when all else is dead... snowdrops come alive

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2020 5:40:00 PM

I really like this, but maybe for your contest you expect something a bit longer?

Brian Strand
Date: 12/10/2020 10:27:00 PM

No Andrea,just those that show rather than tell will do well

Brian Sambourne

Date: 11/27/2020 7:22:00 PM

Very nice. Enjoyed the balanced contrast bestowed by winter. Best wishes. Brian

Brian Strand
Date: 11/27/2020 10:21:00 PM

Cheers Brian ..broken monoku ..one of my favoured imagist vehicles.

P.M. Richter

Date: 2/16/2019 8:12:00 PM

Beautiful Monoku Brian :)

Brian Strand
Date: 2/17/2019 3:07:00 AM

Thanks PM

CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/20/2019 2:24:00 AM

very good monoku ... CayCay

Brian Strand
Date: 1/20/2019 3:46:00 AM

Thanks CayCay

Ann Gilmour

Date: 1/19/2019 8:08:00 PM

Yes these exquisite tiny flowers saying spring is not too far away. Beautiful imagery in so few words Brian. Kindest thoughts Ann x

Brian Strand
Date: 1/20/2019 3:46:00 AM

Thanks Ann

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/19/2019 5:43:00 PM

Hello Brian, I like the way you created this poem.The snow makes everything dull ,bright again. Have a nice evening my friend.

Brian Strand
Date: 1/20/2019 3:43:00 AM

Thanks for your kind comment Darlene

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/19/2019 4:47:00 PM

I love it. Another favorite Brian :)

Brian Strand
Date: 1/20/2019 3:42:00 AM

Thanks Heidi