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Winter Magic

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Winter Magic Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 01/11/24

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Swirling snowflakes are such a beautiful sight Like ballerinas wearing filigree tutus of frosty white Once naked tree branches now laden with snow Children make snow angels, happy faces are aglow A huge snowman is built I hear whoops of delight As snow is gathered up for a fun snowball fight I dress up so warmly with my hat, scarf, and gloves Gazing at twirling snowflakes, which everyone loves

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/23/2024 10:01:00 AM

Jan, you have captured the delight, and beauty, of "swirling snowflakes!" I could sit and watch snow fall for hours completely mesmerized! Congratulations on your win. Hope the weather has warmed up a bit! Blessings and hugs!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/15/2024 5:58:00 AM

Jan, a charming poem, congratulations on your first place win!

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 1/14/2024 11:12:00 PM

lovely write adore the snow.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/14/2024 11:50:00 AM

Beautiful snow, in both your poem and photos. Too bad it melts so fast. I enjoyed.

Charles Messina

Date: 1/13/2024 8:45:00 PM

A perfect seasonal poem, Jan. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs Charlie

Joseph May

Date: 1/13/2024 7:47:00 PM

lovely write Jan, best wishes

Sarah Portrey

Date: 1/13/2024 5:10:00 PM

Nice poem Jan. I have finally logged back on! Must do better haha - I can see you have been busy and will have a good read through your poetry over the coming weeks. Keep it up my friend. Great Stuff!

James Peranteau

Date: 1/13/2024 12:19:00 PM

we are clearly kindred spirts dear poet ') tremendous "rhyme" here (;}

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/13/2024 1:31:00 AM

You capture winter with elegance. Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/12/2024 1:41:00 PM

I enjoyed your fun/wonderful write. Winter snow can be fun/magical... Have a blessed day writing away...............

Deb M

Date: 1/12/2024 5:43:00 AM

Awww lovely Jan! Debx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/12/2024 4:43:00 AM

We may get some of this magic tonight! Love your poem, Jan!

Rob Carmack

Date: 1/11/2024 5:01:00 PM

Makes me miss the snow.

Lin Lane

Date: 1/11/2024 3:46:00 PM

Winter weather at its best. Good lines, Jan.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/11/2024 2:59:00 PM

you've captured the essence of winter's magic so beautifully--naked tree branches laded with snow, snow angels, snow men and dressing warmly. Best wished with the contest! Have a blessed evening, Sara