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Winter Magic

An adrenalin rush, rocked my head When I saw a child- on her sled It made me think; should I go slide I'm eight-two...So, before I died Just one more time, before I'm dead Or before I'm ridden...in my bed What could happen, something tragic? I'm eighty-two, can you call that tragic? So here I go, down the hill ....Wheeee!! Oh my God- ((Tragic)) ...."Peeee"

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Date: 1/15/2024 6:24:00 AM
Charlie, a fun and charming poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 1/11/2024 5:15:00 PM
I love this poem. It's reckless and joyful and funny. And it lets the inner child have a voice :)
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Date: 1/11/2024 4:10:00 AM
OMG, Charlie, I just love this one! I am not yet eighty- two but I can relate for sure! So cute! I hope that your year is off to a great start! Happy Thursday !!
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Date: 1/9/2024 9:37:00 AM
Ha ha Charlie. I’d think that would be the likely outcome!
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Date: 1/8/2024 4:41:00 PM
wonderful and humorous poem with a 'tragic' ending....well done! enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 1/8/2024 11:28:00 AM
Love it and your humour...
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Date: 1/8/2024 10:24:00 AM
Lol we're all guilty of forgetting our age sometimes. Tom
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Date: 1/8/2024 7:53:00 AM
Haha, made me smile this morning. A sweet winter magic, tragic indeed! Hugs ~Anaya
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