Winter Light Breaks Free

winter light breaks free crawling hushed across the vein tumbling water's sing

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2012 10:36:00 PM

Rick , Stopping by to wish you a beautiful Happy Mothers Day :-D I'm hoping God will hear my wishes and send my love too find many mothers in good health, and I pray he continues to give my mother the strength to fight everything her body is battling with right now, God bless~ xoxoxo PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/4/2012 2:46:00 PM

where are u dear friend Rick? hope all is well and u are OK luv.. so miss your comments and contests.. please let me know..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/9/2012 11:04:00 PM

A great one Rick..how are you...good luck in dg contest...I like the end of winter...lol...pd

Kash Poet

Date: 12/31/2011 10:29:00 PM

Very nice haiku Rick.Wish you a very very Happy New Year.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2011 4:26:00 PM

Wow, great imagery. I didn't even notice. Guzzi has a contest on haiku?? (oops sorry, I just realized. It's the LIGHT contest. AH yes, it works well)

Broken Butterfly

Date: 12/21/2011 3:04:00 PM

This is a great Haiku Rick. Tumbling waters do sing. Thank you for my placement in your Poetry On Poetry Contest.

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/21/2011 2:17:00 PM

This is a very sentimental write here ^Rick! I love your "...crawling hushed across the vein..." line, one extreme dedication to nature!! Beautiful poem filling me with awe! Awesome Work!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/21/2011 1:49:00 PM

Wishing you the best in the contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

Darryl Davis

Date: 12/21/2011 1:32:00 PM

This reminds me of home...nice :-)