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A winter does not last forever even if in infinity when everything feels dark - a storm doesn't last forever The baby bear had never been outside was born late on a cold autumn day The snow came early that year Mama bear chose a safe and cozy cave where they could lie undisturbed throughout the winter At this time, not much happens in the bears life The baby bear was a little impatient and got a little bored "I dream about sunshine, adventure and play ... mom ... " In a half-awake state, mama bear scratching his ear - "Lie down closer and sleep a little longer my child ... soon spring will come" A storm doesn't last forever Spring is wonderful for those who have been waiting a long, dark and cold time - a winter does not last forever 22/01/2023 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Winter is not Forever Poetry Contest Sponsored by: BJ Legros Kelley 2nd place in the contest

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Date: 2/19/2023 10:53:00 PM
A beautiful tale of the boy bear and mom bear. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/19/2023 9:34:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I love your wonderful write/picture. This is way toooooo cute. Have a blessed day writing away............................
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Date: 2/19/2023 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem spreading the wisdom and joy of hope.
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Date: 2/19/2023 12:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Thank you for entering it in the 'Winter is not Forever' contest!
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Date: 1/26/2023 7:20:00 PM
Like that baby bear I am waiting for the spring to appear. A cute picture and nice write my friend. love phyl
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Date: 1/23/2023 10:38:00 AM
I put in a write about this. Wish I had a cute picture like you have. Mine is more on the funny side. I like the way you did this. Good Luck. Have a great/blessed day..................
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Date: 1/23/2023 9:17:00 AM
No wonder they live their lives with gusto, even snatching fish wherever they can find them :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/23/2023 9:53:00 AM
- They eat nothing when they sleep in their cave ... hungry when they come out, Kim :) - hugs
Date: 1/23/2023 3:43:00 AM
you tell a comforting story Sunshine, I pray that spring comes early no matter how good a winter we have, its still winter, have a blessed day, sending winter kisses your way :)
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Date: 1/23/2023 9:55:00 AM
- Spring cannot come fast enough ... :) - hugs
Date: 1/23/2023 3:07:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Excellent topic chosen and it reveals some thoughts about what happens to the bear and her cub/s. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 1/23/2023 9:55:00 AM
- Thank you for reading, Sara :) - hugs
Date: 1/22/2023 10:45:00 PM
Lovely idea of a bear taking care of her son. Such a cute idea. Hugs.
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Date: 1/23/2023 9:57:00 AM
- Sometimes I wish I could do like the bears, Victor :) - hugs
Date: 1/22/2023 3:49:00 PM
I really like how you captured this enthusiastic chat about the upcoming springtime in this verse. Good luck with the contest, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 1/23/2023 9:58:00 AM
- Not a bad idea...sleep away the winter...wake up to beautiful spring, Las :) - hugs
Date: 1/22/2023 2:24:00 PM
It can't come soon enough, they're predicting a snow bomb at the start of February here in the uk. Have a great week ahead. Tom
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Date: 1/23/2023 10:00:00 AM
- Today we have had rain all day ... dangerously slippery ... but, there will be new snow .... it's not over yet ... stay warm and safe, Tom :) - hugs
Date: 1/22/2023 1:36:00 PM
Love your photo--and how you captured their thoughts in a lovely dialogue--aspiring to arrival of spring. Apt for the contest theme, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 1/23/2023 10:02:00 AM
- I wrote it with children in mind... many thanks for your lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs

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