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The Spruce trees formed a double sentinel Along a path that seem to lead to nowhere. The sky was dark with heavy clouds As the two lovers trudged along the path, Towards their meagre and poor abode. Occasionally they would stop and kiss, As if they could enkindle some kind of warmth. Yet the blizzard had no pity on them. They tried to hurry before rain began, Still an occasional drop would fall Wetting their threadbare clothes. Soon they arrived and just in time As rain began to pour and mingle with the snow. Inside was frigid and quickly they changed Into warmer clothes. The man lit up the last few logs Whilst she searched for some bread and cheese. How dejected they felt as the fire crackled Hoping they’ll get the warmth they needed. Outside the blizzard roared and still they felt cold. The sound of wolves were heard and fear Increased. They tried to close the windows and doors. Alas they ignored the fireplace as warmth was no more. The next day they were found huddled on the sofa. They needed warmth no more.

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Date: 11/27/2021 3:37:00 AM
So sad ! It could happen to the poor in winter who are exposed to biting chill. However it is so heartening that even death couldn't separate them ! Poignantly portrayed, Victor !
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Date: 10/3/2021 10:16:00 AM
Oh Victor what a sad piece this is. Very well told story with excellent imagery. Congrats on a well deserved POTD. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/28/2021 11:01:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Victor :) - An excellent story / poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/26/2021 2:39:00 PM
Congratulations on poem of the day with this awesome chiller, a very sad end to a romantic tale of love in a winter blizzard… Hugs Belle
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Date: 9/25/2021 9:13:00 AM
Though a chilling write an absolute gem, so glad you got POTD for this my friend.CONGRATULATIONS! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/25/2021 8:53:00 AM
Victor, a chilling write, well done, a belated congratulations on POTD! hugs
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Date: 9/25/2021 1:38:00 AM
Ah Victor the season of living sculptures
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Date: 9/24/2021 6:19:00 PM
Your thoughts touch my heart once again, my dear friend. That chill still lingers. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/24/2021 2:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful yet sad write. Have a blessed day/weekend................
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Date: 9/24/2021 12:45:00 PM
A sad ending to this wintry write Victor, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 9/24/2021 11:35:00 AM
Victor, congratulations on POTD. Sadly, countless people will not have enough this winter~ Warren
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Date: 9/24/2021 10:49:00 AM
Hi Victor, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/24/2021 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations Victor!!
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Date: 9/24/2021 8:17:00 AM
Well-deserved P.O.T.D. Congratulations, Victor!
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Date: 9/24/2021 7:58:00 AM
Sad story but worthy of your POTD...Delice...Well done.
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Date: 9/24/2021 7:37:00 AM
Victor, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 9/24/2021 6:44:00 AM
Great winter verse , but so sad, congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/24/2021 6:32:00 AM
Oh.. if only there was a way for them to escape from the blizzard...sad yet great storytelling... Congrats on your POTD honor Victor... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/24/2021 5:54:00 AM
Victor, beautiful and excellent writing, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 9/24/2021 5:43:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats Victor on poem of the day. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 9/24/2021 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations, Victor, on your POTD. A brilliant poem with superb imageries - tragedy is not easy to portray. Repetition of "warmth no more" increases the sad effect. BW ~ Mala
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Date: 9/24/2021 5:21:00 AM
Great imagery, you took me on a journey to the world of poor and although sad for them, I felt I have lot to be happy about. Congratulations on your well deserved Potd. Enjoy the honour and day
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Date: 9/24/2021 3:03:00 AM
Back to send congratulations Victor on getting POTD. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 9/24/2021 2:46:00 AM
Back again to congratulate you on POTD,Victor!
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Date: 9/24/2021 1:10:00 AM
Back with congratulations Victor on the well deserved honour of POTD. Tom
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