Winter

With his icy fingers he stole my smokey breath,
laid a sheet of slippery freezing cold by my feet
and then whispered in my ear right to the drum
that echoed in my brain with excruciating pain.

She, his wife was of a complete different temperament
quietly without fuss she crafted blanched cotton flakes,
each a masterpiece, unique as if she retained every design 
she had ever imagined so each time she could create anew.

He however with his bravado with his swelled chest
would pepper speeding glass-like pellets into the air.
Sting our faces without regret. Salt our wounds.
Mercilessly bite into our flesh with his frosted fangs.

Daintily she'd sprinkle the sky with the magic of her cheer
feather the atmosphere in a delicate splatter of alabaster.
Layer by layer she laid soft sheets of snow to the delight
of everyone alike creating a playground of endless mirth.

His breath reeked of dreams frozen, nipped in the bud.
Already he had high jacked his sisters, the Autumn twins
sent them packing, hurried, gathering their rustic garments.
He had no love of his siblings except his baby sister, Spring.

His wife loving and caring would temper his yearly onslaught.
She knew of his pain, deep, abandoned by his father Summer.
At times she'd blow slightly warmer air to provide respite for
us mere humans and allow the sun to warm our weary bones.

They  would sit together and it was her would bring out
the albums of family photos view pictures of his mother.
Her smile like music would soothe his stone cold heart.
He loved, when she'd visit in the guise of an Indian Summer.

With his icy fingers he stole my smokey breath.
I felt her presence there to temper his harsh avail.

Winter had arrived but when they walked as one 
this magnificent couple dressed in their royal winter whites,
without a second thought you  would bow in front of their regal 
stance, a sight to behold, one that encompassed the entire land.


04~01~2015
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton
Contest Name: Seasons
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Severson Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 7:07 PM
This is one of my favorite poems that I've read on this site so far! Amazing work!
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 9:25 PM
hmm, I had already faved that other one. Let me see if I got this one yet because it is very deserving and I see it is super high on the list. I want to keep you on that list, Armand, and I want you to come back to Soup.... Pronto!
Hamilton Avatar
January 16, 2015 at 6:41 PM
a re-read of this expressive pen Maurice and again it blows me away hugs fav'ing it
A   Avatar
January 11, 2015 at 9:23 PM
hello Maurice,, congratulations on your Awesome Season win. ~LINDA~
Deschler Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 7:12 PM
A wonderful personification of "old man winter". This poem was so compelling and creative. It held my attention all the way through. Fantastic writing, Armand!
Austin Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 9:57 AM
The Greeks would love this one, Maurice. Making gods of the seasons suits you well in this gem Love, daver
Lamoureux Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 7:16 PM
The best poem I have read today, I can't imagine anyone taking this theme and doing a better job with it. Congratulations on your upcoming win!
Horsman Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 10:58 AM
wow number one written all over this gem..a joy to read Maurice.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 1:43 AM
Such breathtaking write with every drawn line.. :) BIG CONGRATULATIONS and am glad I share the same spot with you.. :)! ........olive eloisa
Roper Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 8:28 PM
Back to congratulations on your win, beautiful descriptive write, Maurice.
A. Sharma Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 12:47 AM
Wow very wonderful tremendous write Maurice! Congrats on ur win!Very happy new year 2015! Thnx for ur visits to my page!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 12:15 AM
Yea to Shadow for inspiring you to write such an amazing poem for her contest Armand. I loved every line and did not want this poem to end. Bravo my friend and Congratulations on your deserving win. Blessings, Connie Faving it!
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 11:13 PM
yep, you got first place. WAY TO GO!!!
Lawless Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 5:33 PM
Excellent job Maurice, the entire dysfunctional Season's family in one poem. Congrats on the win,,,,deserved.
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 1:44 PM
Oh, I do hope this got first place for you, Armand. I see you won. Congratulations!!
Sietesantos Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 12:15 PM
Maurice, what an outstanding personification of Winter this piece is! It's no surprise that it is a top winner! Congratulations, my friend! Pandita.
Haight Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 11:18 AM
Maurice, this is such an amazing poem! Sorry I missed it before. It is such a brilliant personification! Loved the way Winter's wife tries to keep him in check! You have such a wonderful imagination! Congratulations on your fine win! 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
Squyres Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 9:55 AM
Absolutely love that you gave Old Man Winter a wife in your poem. The contrasts of the two made for a splendid poem... Thrilled to read !! Sooooooo... enjoyed your take on the theme. Congrats on your win !! So clever !!
Mehta Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 9:21 AM
What I like the most is fine personification, congrats on the win, Maurice
Hamilton Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 7:51 AM
this carried me there Maurice top notch poem congrats on win hugs
Allison Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 7:44 AM
Simply sensational Armand - dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 6:59 PM
WOW!! Maurice, a winner, and a 7 in my eyes, I would never had thought the seasons as a family and then looking into their family album .
Allison Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 5:06 PM
Incredible personification Armand am in awe of your creativity - Shadow will have a tough job with this contest! Hugs jan xxx
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 4:08 PM
wow, this is amazing, Armand. Glad I had just enough time to read this one on my way off. A seven and a FAVE. Very clever to so totally personify him that he even has his father as summer and a wife who is the "good" part of himself. Mine pales beside yours!!
Meade Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 2:28 PM
Awesome Mr. Freeze -- this thawed even my hard heart!! 7
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