Winter

W inter at times became a paradise lost-and-found  
I recall huddling over a static, crackling old radio
N ews announcement: School canceled tomorrow!
T he yard oh my the yard, buried in a blanket of quiet 
E ven the fence posts wear tilted, funny white hats
R abbit and sparrow tracks in the snow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 8:09 PM
Here is a GREAT golden oldie for me to read. How ARE you, my friend?? (congrats in Brian's contest)
Barden Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 6:47 PM
Wonderful Acrostic, Tim - Blessings and congrats on your win, my friend! :-)
La France Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Tim, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem!
White Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 2:47 AM
Congratulations :) I love this small but imaginative acrostic.
La France Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 1:55 PM
Tim, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely Acrostic of winter, well done ~
Hamilton Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Great acrostic poem Tim, congrats on your fine placement!
A   Avatar
January 11, 2015 at 9:26 PM
Tim, congratulations on your Awesome Season win. ~LINDA~
Guzzi Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 6:13 PM
Shadow had quite a job all these poems were so special, what a great memory! Congrad's on your win. Light & love
A. Sharma Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 2:15 AM
Tim this is an amazing write! Congrats on huge win! wishing u a happy n healthy new year 2015!
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 11:01 PM
oh I remember this one and I love it again seeing it here with a win. BIG congrats, Tim!
Mehta Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 9:24 PM
nicely done piece on winter, congrats on the win, Tim
Yvonne Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 2:42 PM
Love this, unique and paints childhood memories well done, Congratulations on your fine win.
Squyres Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 11:19 AM
Melancholy slips into my thoughts upon reading this... though I see the forced humor of the tilted, funny white hats. Excellent delivery !! Congrats on your win !!
Hamilton Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 8:20 AM
congrats on win Tim lovely pen hugs
Gorelick Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 7:57 AM
Tim, this is wonderful..I don't understand why this wasn't placed much higher.. Anyway, congrats. BG I remember the radio bit too..lol.
Allison Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 7:52 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Just dropping by to say, Hi...missing you, your humor and wonderful poetry since I returned. Hugs, Rhonda :))
Hicks Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 12:21 AM
Very nice Acrostic, Tim... delightful imagery - especially the hat wearing fence posts! If it was my house, however, there'd be Chestnuts Roasting on an Open Fire by Nat King Cole playing in the background... ohhhh the nostalgia.
Onclaud Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 1:56 PM
incredible imagery, tim.. sweet cheers on your big win.. huggs
Bateman Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 1:35 PM
Tim, Great imagery here and an artful build out of the "WINTER" acrostic. Very well-done!! Best Wishes, Gary
A. Sharma Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 10:33 AM
Loved the wonderful imagery Tim! Cancelled school used to be heavenly I remember! Congrats on huge win!
Sirak Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 7:58 AM
Beautiful images of winter. I remember waiting for school to be cancelled but up north it hardly ever was.
Mehta Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 1:27 AM
Brilliant acrostic on autumn, Tim, congrats on the win
Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 5:41 PM
oh I just loved this one from the first time I saw it, Tim. BIG congrats and I think I want to FAVE it too!!!
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 5:31 PM
dropping back with my congratulations it was great to read this again Tim:-) hugs jan xxx
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