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writing on gray slate the chalk without snowy flakes — listless gaze of geese 1/25/2020

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Date: 1/28/2020 6:36:00 AM
Beautiful.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2020 7:13:00 AM
Thank you!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2020 7:12:00 AM
Thank you, Kai!
Date: 1/27/2020 11:35:00 AM
I can see it as described. Your imagery sound.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2020 2:44:00 PM
Yay!
Date: 1/27/2020 6:27:00 AM
Lovely; I like how the end line sums your thoughts. ~ Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2020 6:37:00 AM
Thank you, Paul!
Date: 1/26/2020 7:23:00 AM
Hi Kim, your creativity and imagination are most definitely magnificent in this Senryu! Blessings, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2020 7:35:00 AM
Thanks so much from the bottom of my heart!
Date: 1/26/2020 4:33:00 AM
Impressive imagery dearest, Him xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2020 7:35:00 AM
Thank you, my always sweet friend!
Date: 1/25/2020 10:19:00 PM
Profound senryu, my friend! So well-crafted. Cheers, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2020 7:36:00 AM
Thank you so much! Cheers back at you!
Date: 1/25/2020 4:57:00 PM
what a beautiful image you create... lovely kim... hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/26/2020 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, dear sweet poet!

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