Winter

Winter Sunshine creeps, warming meadows Lost in newborn snow – Frosty stars embrace the moon. 12/14/19 Contest - Writing Challenge, December - Winter Haiku or Senryu Sponsor Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Line Gauthier

Date: 12/25/2019 12:40:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Sam. Merry Christmas! Best wishes to you and your loved ones for 2020.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/5/2020 11:27:00 PM

Hi Line, Thank you! So good to hear from you. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas. Happy New Year to you and yours.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2019 2:15:00 PM

oops, I don't think I am able to soupmail you. So I will tell you here. the syllable count is 5/7/5 and you reversed it to 7/5/7 Just a heads up!!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/17/2019 5:03:00 PM

That will teach me to slow down and read! Thank you!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2019 2:13:00 PM

this is very beautiful. Soupmail for you.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/17/2019 4:52:00 PM

So glad you liked it. Haiku, while it seems simple, is definitely an art form all unto itself! Thank you for all of your encouragement and support.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/14/2019 12:24:00 PM

This has beautiful imagery of stars seen through the frosty air. Mele Kalikimaka! xxoo

Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/17/2019 4:54:00 PM

Mele Kalikimaka to you!!! So good to hear from you. I, too, love the imagery and the movement from dawn to midnight!