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Winning Pancake - Didactic Contest

You want her love
through her desire,
Her love  of food
Is too your good

Get the mIx right
Flour is your welcoming arms
Eggs the desire in your voice
Milk the kisses you bestow by choice

Make a perfect batter
Make a homely place with your arms
Slowly add the kisses one by one
Followed by loving whispers enjoy them

Mix it well
Add flowers to her bed
Hold her hand show her the way
Fold her close to you yes she will stay

Getting warm
Her body is ready
For whatever filling you choose
You are both hungry, with nothing to lose

Which filling are you
Are you the sweet kind
All goodness and light
Or the savoury filling that lasts all night.

Remember not to burn
Don't over cook 
Trying too hard on a hot heat
Slowly cooked makes it more of a treat

Your hooked
So successfully done
Your filling was first class
She is yours, no one can surpass.

Penned 9 Sept 2015.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/10/2015 10:08:00 PM
ahhhh, nice and sweet one on pancakes!! I wonder why the contest asks didactic. I still am not sure I know what that means!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/11/2015 1:54:00 AM
well Andrea i read about it and tried to follow the rules, I still don't know if I am correct .....Seren
Date: 9/10/2015 2:37:00 AM
What a beauty u penned here Seren! Gl in contest!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/11/2015 1:54:00 AM
Thanks Dr Upma, wasnt sure what i was doing....Seren

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