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Winnie the Witch

Winnie Witch loves this time of year Halloween time is drawing near In her pink underwear She’ll give you quite a scare Then she’ll hastily disappear! Away on her broomstick she flew Ended up in darkest Peru She went on a hike Then got on her bike It’s the thing some travelers do! On our Island Halloween is called 'Hop Tu Naa' The local shops are starting to have displays in their windows which inspired the poem 09~21~16
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Konos Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 9:03 PM
Excellent
Allison Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 2:16 AM
oh welcome back Judy so lovely to see you my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Inman Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 12:24 PM
I thought that was you in the picture Jan. A cute write, does 'Hop Tu Naa' have a specific meaning or translation, Celtic?
Allison Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 6:21 PM
I have just googled and found this info...Hop-tu-Naa is a Celtic festival celebrated in the Isle of Man on 31 October. Predating Halloween, it is the celebration of the original New Year's Eve (Oie Houney). I will always hide behind my avatar James lol but I have to admit I though the pic of Winnie was very cute:-) hugs Jan xx
Nance Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 9:14 AM
I will never look at a witch again the same way, all I will think about is pink underwear! haha, hugs x
Allison Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 9:24 AM
ha ha ha Cas I do worry about my muse - you have to admit she looks cute and friendly in the picture I found:-) hugs jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Interesting work..Those pink undies go well with all black..LOL..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 4:26 PM
LOL Sara - just a fun write I saw a Halloween display in a shop and was inspired:-) hugs jan xx
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 3:10 PM
Very nice, Jan. I loved this character, Winnie.
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 3:50 PM
I thin she looks really cute in the picture Sarban:-) Maybe she can have some adventures in the future lol:-) hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 2:01 PM
lol....good one Jan
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 2:04 PM
Cheers Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 12:19 PM
Nicely penned Jan....best wishes
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Thanks Joseph just a fun write i love writing this form:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 10:52 AM
Jan, you are a Master at limericks and this is delightfully amazing ~
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Thanks Constance:-):-) Can I be a mistress instead lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 9:13 AM
Another great limerick. A fav..
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 9:14 AM
Cheers my friend:-) loved your comments on Andrea's recent poem made me LOL:-) hugs Jan x
Turner Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:46 AM
A fun read, Jan. I've often wondered, when they fly on their brooms, do they get bugs in their teeth?
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:59 AM
I will remain tight lipped on that one Daniel lol:-) hugs jan xx
Wigley Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:40 AM
Great Lim, Jan- can you get my missus a brochure? Viv x
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:59 AM
Thanks Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:10 AM
- I have to buy pink underwear .... A great one ,Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:58 AM
LOL DT:-) hugs Jan xx
Turner Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Need some help shopping, AL:)
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:11 AM
Ha Ha Ha love that comment Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Hauser  Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:06 AM
Nice!
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:08 AM
:-):-) thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 7:46 AM
lollollol! love this lady! :)-luloo
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 7:58 AM
I couldn't resist LuLoo lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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