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Winnie the Witch

It’s Halloween and Winnie the Witch flies on her broomstick with O’Bramovitch mid-flight puss acquires a nasty twitch both his nostrils flare, he begins to itch his pitiful me-ow rises to fever pitch shame cat's aren't fitted with an on off switch! A Halloween black cat, folk may say is kitsch poor Bram needs help, Winnie flies to Ipswich landing at the home of a vet named Mitch Mitch quickly mashes up some roasted flitch Bram gobbles it all up without any hitch he says his twitch and itch were just a glitch Alas, Bram’s pre-flight meal - a Beluga sandwich was the tasty snack which gave Bram a stitch Mitch declares that cat caviar is far far too rich so this Halloween treat Win will now have to ditch Bram’s irate, caterwauling that Winnie’s a snitch hissing all the flight back to their home in Bloxwich Halloween Monorhyme Contest Poetry Contest Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger 10/26/21
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Kauffman Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 9:09 AM
Just sheer delight Jan so reflective of your mastery of the whimsical and rhymes. No cat caviar for Bram next Halloween indeed if Winnie wants a moment of peace and quiet! So wonderfully creative! Congratulations. Hugs and a set of ear plugs for Winnie!
Roper Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 10:25 PM
Awesome write, Jan, congratulations on your win. Hugs dear friend
Edmonds  Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 7:50 PM
Congratulations on your win with “Winnie The Witch” in Caren’s contest, a wonderful write in Monorhyme form… Hugs Belle :-) xx
Alex Avatar
November 9, 2021 at 10:13 AM
Great monorhyme on Winnie the witch. Congratulations!
Fowler Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 11:22 AM
Fun, fun, fun! Very nicely written and terrific mono rhyme! Linda
Y. Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 2:14 PM
Wow! Jan, I enjoyed this from start to finish. I had a nice rhythm and flow. Your rhymes were very good too. I found this piece very entertaining as well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great weekend, my friend;-) Alexis
Cheney Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 6:17 AM
I love it, right from the title on through.
Allison Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 6:24 AM
Thanks Kenneth I am not a Halloween fan but thought i would have fun for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 2:33 PM
excellent work with this one, Jan. I love this.
Allison Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 6:23 AM
thanks Andrea:-)hugs Jan x
Skelly Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 8:03 AM
A black cat with an itch, great fun...Delice
Allison Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 9:35 AM
thanks Delice:-) hugs Jan xx
Gentile Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 4:29 AM
This is delightful Jan, love your rhymes! and cats fitted with an off switch!! Brilliant!
Allison Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 9:34 AM
was fun to write Mike:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 12:56 AM
A black country witch from Bloxwich lol. Well written Jan and good luck. Tom
Allison Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 1:21 AM
I enjoyed the challenge Tom, I wrote down a list of 'witch' words and thought it best not to have Bram calling her a bitch for denying the caviar treat lol:-) hope you are feeling better, covid cases on the rise again with norovirus and flu - welcome to winter:-( hugs Jan xx
Buhagiar Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 12:54 AM
Which is a witch of a poem. Hugs.
Allison Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 1:18 AM
lol thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
Faulkner Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 3:24 PM
I was thinking of doing 'witch' rhymes but now I'm glad I didn't, yours are sublime, best wishes for the contest!
Allison Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 4:27 PM
Thanks Michelle, I have tweaked the poem as Jenna noticed I had used 'switch' twice, hugs jan xx
Logan Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 3:19 PM
You were on a rhyming tirade. Well done, Jan.
Logan Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 3:58 AM
You're very welcome, Jan. A beluga sandwich, whether the flesh or the caviar, holds no temptation for me, but then I'm not a cat, or a bitch...well, maybe I can be.
Allison Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 4:26 PM
Thanks for the mail I do appreciate your advice xx
Brown Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 1:55 PM
Jan, Outstanding and cleaver. Best Wishes ~ Debra
Allison Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 1:57 PM
Thanks Debra, I am not a Halloween fan so i hope the sponsor likes my silly thoughts:-) hugs Jan xx
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