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It’s Halloween and Winnie the Witch flies on her broomstick with O’Bramovitch mid-flight puss acquires a nasty twitch both his nostrils flare, he begins to itch his pitiful me-ow rises to fever pitch shame cat's aren't fitted with an on off switch! A Halloween black cat, folk may say is kitsch poor Bram needs help, Winnie flies to Ipswich landing at the home of a vet named Mitch Mitch quickly mashes up some roasted flitch Bram gobbles it all up without any hitch he says his twitch and itch were just a glitch Alas, Bram’s pre-flight meal - a Beluga sandwich was the tasty snack which gave Bram a stitch Mitch declares that cat caviar is far far too rich so this Halloween treat Win will now have to ditch Bram’s irate, caterwauling that Winnie’s a snitch hissing all the flight back to their home in Bloxwich Halloween Monorhyme Contest Poetry Contest Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger 10/26/21

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Date: 11/10/2021 9:09:00 AM
Just sheer delight Jan so reflective of your mastery of the whimsical and rhymes. No cat caviar for Bram next Halloween indeed if Winnie wants a moment of peace and quiet! So wonderfully creative! Congratulations. Hugs and a set of ear plugs for Winnie!
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Date: 11/9/2021 10:25:00 PM
Awesome write, Jan, congratulations on your win. Hugs dear friend
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Date: 11/9/2021 7:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with “Winnie The Witch” in Caren’s contest, a wonderful write in Monorhyme form… Hugs Belle :-) xx
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Date: 11/9/2021 10:13:00 AM
Great monorhyme on Winnie the witch. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/1/2021 11:22:00 AM
Fun, fun, fun! Very nicely written and terrific mono rhyme! Linda
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Date: 10/29/2021 2:14:00 PM
Wow! Jan, I enjoyed this from start to finish. I had a nice rhythm and flow. Your rhymes were very good too. I found this piece very entertaining as well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great weekend, my friend;-) Alexis
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Date: 10/29/2021 6:17:00 AM
I love it, right from the title on through.
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2021 6:24:00 AM
Thanks Kenneth I am not a Halloween fan but thought i would have fun for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/28/2021 2:33:00 PM
excellent work with this one, Jan. I love this.
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Date: 10/29/2021 6:23:00 AM
thanks Andrea:-)hugs Jan x
Date: 10/28/2021 8:03:00 AM
A black cat with an itch, great fun...Delice
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Date: 10/28/2021 9:35:00 AM
thanks Delice:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/28/2021 4:29:00 AM
This is delightful Jan, love your rhymes! and cats fitted with an off switch!! Brilliant!
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Date: 10/28/2021 9:34:00 AM
was fun to write Mike:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/27/2021 12:56:00 AM
A black country witch from Bloxwich lol. Well written Jan and good luck. Tom
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Date: 10/27/2021 1:21:00 AM
I enjoyed the challenge Tom, I wrote down a list of 'witch' words and thought it best not to have Bram calling her a bitch for denying the caviar treat lol:-) hope you are feeling better, covid cases on the rise again with norovirus and flu - welcome to winter:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/27/2021 12:54:00 AM
Which is a witch of a poem. Hugs.
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Date: 10/27/2021 1:18:00 AM
lol thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/26/2021 3:24:00 PM
I was thinking of doing 'witch' rhymes but now I'm glad I didn't, yours are sublime, best wishes for the contest!
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Date: 10/26/2021 4:27:00 PM
Thanks Michelle, I have tweaked the poem as Jenna noticed I had used 'switch' twice, hugs jan xx
Date: 10/26/2021 3:19:00 PM
You were on a rhyming tirade. Well done, Jan.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/27/2021 3:58:00 AM
You're very welcome, Jan. A beluga sandwich, whether the flesh or the caviar, holds no temptation for me, but then I'm not a cat, or a bitch...well, maybe I can be.
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2021 4:26:00 PM
Thanks for the mail I do appreciate your advice xx
Date: 10/26/2021 1:55:00 PM
Jan, Outstanding and cleaver. Best Wishes ~ Debra
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Date: 10/26/2021 1:57:00 PM
Thanks Debra, I am not a Halloween fan so i hope the sponsor likes my silly thoughts:-) hugs Jan xx

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