Winners Vs Losers -Revised and Retitled
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Falling deep, Sam did not even pout.
In a dirt hole he could not get out.
Then a thought came to him,
and it was not so grim.
He formed stairs from the dirt –escape route!
Also Sam's friend got stuck in a hole.
He was helpless as Sam, yet the role
that he played was to sit,
and with no thought to it.
Quitters need to determine a goal!
May 14, 2021
For Margarita Lillico's Quitters Never Win Poetry Contest
(At the suggestion of a fellow poet, I decided to add on a second
limerick, which I hope is ok to do. This poet thought I should write
about the other man in the cartoon!)
Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2021
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