Wings Stealing Sundrops

The elegance of a duck gliding over the still pond....poetry in motion. Down here the serenity of this afternoon of May suddenly shattered by a busy kingfisher, it swoops down to water for day's last prey sending ripples in the still pond water and then vanishes in the hushness of dying day. The Spring comes alive as a cuckoo starts singing last song of the day, its beseeching tone echoes in my mind and in nature. Wings of migratory birds in sky stealing Sundrops for a new dawn. © 2011 kashinath karmakar =================================
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Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 10:43 PM
revisiting an oldie of yours. I was thinking, this would make a great entry for deb's contest going on right now. If you just redid it a bit and reposted it as a spring Haibun and made part of it into a haiku!!
Devnath  Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 1:58 PM
Congratulation on your win. Loved it, bl
Neels Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 10:06 AM
Absolutely beautiful Kash, Congratulations on your first place win in Brian's contest :)
Falotico Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 5:59 AM
Hey K.K. this is an amazing piece of poetry...Congrats!!!! your friend Michael
Brown Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 5:28 AM
Congratulations on the win in Brian's "Show Me" contest Cash. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 12:13 AM
overjoyed by your smashing win, dera kashi.. so well done, so well-deserved!! wohoo, KUDOS!..:) hugggs
Quigley Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 10:51 PM
Welcome to the winners circle Kash. Congratulations
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 9:39 PM
This was a real beauty you used for his contest, Kash. Big congratulations. You are so funny using that baby picture. I forgot all about it being the one Soup used before. How did you find it?? And sure fire just means "for sure!!! Luv, Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 9:39 PM
soupmail
Sherman Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 7:45 PM
Congratulations..wonderful write!!
Sweetheart Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 6:44 PM
CONGRATS KASH ON FIRST PLACE WIN LUV ...
Johnson Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 6:02 PM
Very enticing pictures you draw. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Kendrick Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 4:16 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Gorelick Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 4:20 PM
What a beauty! Tardy congrats on your fine win. BG
Maverick Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 3:02 PM
Congratulations Kashinkath, on the result in Constance's contest.
Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 9:37 PM
Kash, Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this the second time as well! sopmail.
Mehta Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 7:55 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of constance, kashinath
Brown Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 6:24 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Constance's "For (Four) Beautful Birds"contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
La France Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 9:37 PM
Congratulations Kash, on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem~~
Onclaud Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 9:34 PM
cheery as you, kashi.. … raving KUDOS to you for the special win :) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 8:47 PM
Congrats Kash on your amazing win in four birds contest with this beautiful and elegant entry my friend.. enjoy another super win with luv...
K. Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 2:41 PM
Your title alone is sheer beauty Kashinath-- totally liked that "wings stealing sundrops" -- wow way to go for the imagery of that and I think your actual write totally reinforced that-- you ended this perfectly-- Constance sure would have a hard time judging I am reading beautiful entries! & nope, my ant write isn't for a contest ;) just me being antsy & angsty
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 2:10 PM
Hey, Kash, I hope to check out contest winners soon. I have to leave here in 40 min. I sure hope you won a contest lately.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 9:15 AM
A lovely assortment of feathered friends Kash for the contest.. I luv your first line about the duck.. poetry in motion reflects their gliding flying pattern luv..good luck in the contest myf friend...
La France Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 2:28 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest. Well done!
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