Wings of Wisdom - Collaboration


On the edge of a cliff between vulnerability and strength
I stand in solitude atop my chariot of dissolving mysteries.
Withering in nostalgia a little girl, a reader of the stars,
sees in crystal ball, midsummer dreams wrapped in winter warmth.
She wishes to exist in multitudes of legendary stories,
a princess no doubt to whom I whisper bittersweet melody at night,
"One day you'll be the woman of your dreams in eternity of love.
You darling, are a wave of perpetual rhythms in experiences,
a pilgrim of your own facets in kaleidoscopic journeys,
when you've lived my years, your wings of wisdom will flutter,
to sprinkle the essence of past on a little girl weaving probabilities,
light will enter your life someday for you're someone just like me."


August 25, 2020

MAX 12 LINES - poem-inspired prompt Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 9/15/2020 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" Enjoy your win.............
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Date: 9/13/2020 10:05:00 PM
Excellent, Aditi, congrats on a fine composition.
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Date: 9/13/2020 5:05:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Wondrous muse indeed. God bless you.
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Date: 9/12/2020 2:28:00 PM
A wonderful write Aditi, congratulations for a much deserved top spot. Belle
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Date: 9/12/2020 9:46:00 AM
Marvelous writing, Aditi. I read thru 3 times and it was better each time. So many layers and a wonderful message. Well done with the collaboration and big congrats for your #1 win. Blessings ~ John
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Date: 9/12/2020 8:18:00 AM
Great verse, Aditi, using Line's unfinished verse. Congratulations on your collaboration win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/25/2020 8:03:00 AM
One day you'll be the woman of your dreams in eternity of love~ I'll take this line for me...:-) Enjoyed your wings of wisdom Aditi mam:-) Keep inspiring.Take care.Much love from Deepa:-)
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