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An eagle circles low to scout the land As regal as a symbol should command A hoisted flag whips in the brushing of the wind These are symbols which have dignity to span Whose rapturous silent song of antheming Reminds me of the price that has been paid For me to walk the independence trail so paved With youth and strength, so grappled and pursued Not fearless, yet courageous endurance is renewed Where blood and tears have made the pages fold Let me not forget the tragic stories told Out of the cleansing night of stars and tides Here on the shores where freedom never dies Let me not forget the price of those who gave their all In that rich earth a richer dust conceals How dear the cost for me to walk so free My peace of mind so blessed by freedom's breeze Where I walk head held high and all the while I know That souls were lost for me, where last bells were tolled Where quiet shadows fall, and solemn thoughts recall Where the eagle crowns the flagpole, we call home

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/6/2010 7:58:00 AM
This is an outstanding wrte Carrie. Congratulations on your big win. Thank you for your comments on my cinquain. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/6/2010 7:29:00 AM
Truly a great write on the liberty and freedoms that we sometimes take for granted. It is tragic that the students of today don't get the sense of the cost that our liberty has had to pay. Congrats on your win in the contest! Dan C.
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Date: 7/6/2010 6:37:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in the freedom and liberty contest with another winning write ..enjoy ..excellent words to live by.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. still on vacation.. AlohA
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Date: 7/6/2010 4:15:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Dane Ann's contest "Liberty and Freedom to Choose". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2010 3:34:00 AM
Hi Carrie-- a very moving write that reminds us just how precious freedom is--I do hope we won't ever forget... congrats on your win with this emotive and image-laden piece! Btw just one typo for "its" in your 11th line--hope this helps-- :) ---congrats again! --nikko :)
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Date: 5/12/2010 6:47:00 PM
reminds me of the photography of Eddie Adams.... well done! Carrie! jimbo
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Date: 5/12/2010 3:38:00 PM
HI, Carrie, I love the way you kept referring to the lovely image of the purple lupine. I am sure this will do well. I dont' know if I ever said, thanks for responding to my mother's day blog. LUv, andrea
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