Windy Roadside In Russia - On the Verge

WINDY  ROADSIDE  IN  RUSSIA   -  ON THE VERGE


When I saw her she was on the verge,
Grey wisps of hair blown in wind.
Not the carefully combed-back
Black-hair  parting from her  kolkhoz days,
Not the ebony  shining ringlets of school.

Holes in her shoes   -  she   feels  the roughness 
Of the path which has brought her here  
To this point on the  road   
Threading through Her life. 
Hole of  her  sole  is  the whole of her soul.

She has nothing  not dirty  and  ill-fitting,  
Like her life, with no protection   against the elements.
Coin plops in  plastic  box   -  she blesses  herself and drinks.
Her   sole  soulless  solace…..tea.

Cars flash by.  I see her askance,  mustn’t  catch her eye,
Risk the chance   to say - Who?  Me?    She  fills  me
With unease   in  my  ease-filled   life
As I get closer.

Pretended  not  to see her,  quickened my  pace,
Looked busy and  preoccupied. 
Me……about to give   -    but didn’t.
When I saw her I was on the verge

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/21/2010 4:01:00 PM
This one is so sad..so very well written..good job. BG
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