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Windswept Winter Storm

Windswept nimbus sentinels are gathering quickly darkening the noon day sky. Sunlight wanes, becoming veiled behind layers of opaque clouds. Like shrouds they hasten by. Gusting winds approach from the north, forewarning of a tempest storm. I hear thunder beating on his drum, followed by claps from many more as the chilling temperature quickly falls. Winter's fingers are traveling with speed and waves are crashing along the coast. Their frothy bubbles reach the shore, filling puddles in the sand at high tide. Gulls screech in search for one last meal before finding a haven in clearer skies and mariners hurry in search of safe harbor. Maple branches sway with the wind, collecting earthbound snowflakes upon their bare limbs while Mother Nature is changing her faded dress from the wrinkled one she wore in Autumn. It's torn and tattered upon the ground in shades of gold, crimson and brown. She's donned a lovely glittering new garment, a brocaded gown and cloak of Winter white. December 30, 2022 Winter Storm Contest Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 12/31/2022 6:54:00 AM
Intense imagery, well done!
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/2/2023 2:33:00 AM
Thanks very much, Sheriff Mark.
Date: 12/30/2022 11:00:00 AM
Lin, your imagery is always so clear inviting us into your picture to experience. I can feel the coming storm. Your poem really sparkles like "a cloak of Winter white." Best wishes for the contest. Blessings! Happy New Year!
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/30/2022 11:25:00 AM
Hi Sam and thank you so very much for your lovely comments on my stormy poem.
Date: 12/30/2022 10:56:00 AM
You paint a bleak picture of the impending storm Lin, love the transition from autumn to winter, stunning imagery. Best of luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/30/2022 11:24:00 AM
If I can picture it in my mind, I can write it descriptively, but if I can allow you to see my imagery, I feel that I've done the poem justice. Thank you very much, Tom. I hope to have a great weekend and wish the same for you.

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