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I always answer
     Without hesitation
          To adventure’s calls
Through waves that toss
     Winds that batter
          I survive squalls

On a sea of emotion
     Alone I swirl
          Feeling blue
My rowboat has two oars
     Two benches
          Shouldn’t it carry two?

Sky and sea
     Speak of eternity
          But they have each other
I would give all
     Just to know love
          And sail with another




Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/21/2018 4:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this heartfelt poem.
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Date: 6/21/2018 7:45:00 AM
Beautiful, Carolyn. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/5/2018 8:09:00 PM
Well-written words -JT
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Date: 4/28/2018 8:42:00 AM
Great poem, Carolyn, our emotions can sometimes be very stormy. May your seas always be calm and your boat always have a companion my friend. John
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Date: 4/5/2018 2:33:00 PM
A metaphor that stirs the heart and soul Carolyn. Beautifully penned! I hope spring makes your wishes a reality my friend. xxoo
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Date: 3/27/2018 6:44:00 PM
Such a gentle stirring piece Carolyn. Beautiful :)
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Date: 2/25/2018 10:58:00 AM
A soulful appealing poem, yearning sweetly so poetically. Metaphor and reality images combined super. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again, Pleez do comment my newest poem here too.
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Date: 2/21/2018 4:19:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Carolyn, just stop by, thinking of you..and so pleased i did.
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Date: 10/16/2017 9:21:00 PM
This is such a lovely poem Carolyn. It is so sad the damage hurricane's cause. I know you are in an area, as I am that hurricane's often form. We have been very fortunate here in Hawaii and have not had a really bad hurricane in some time. I love your poem my friend. May happiness in love soon be yours. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 10/13/2017 7:06:00 PM
Sadly, I can relate to this sad but beautiful poem. Well done!
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Date: 10/12/2017 10:38:00 AM
A sad but beautiful poem of longing and yearning for love, well done!
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Date: 10/7/2017 5:52:00 PM
Beautiful poetry with a lovely loving image. So sorry to read of nature's turmoil through her wrath, powerful she may be, James x
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Date: 10/6/2017 2:25:00 PM
The sea and you and one more makes two. Beautiful poem, Carolyn! KEEP WRITING!
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Date: 10/4/2017 1:01:00 AM
What a heartfelt write! The perfect comparison of a windswept boat and a torn heart.
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Date: 10/1/2017 1:23:00 PM
I feel the longing in this write. It's so beautifully written. :)
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Date: 9/29/2017 3:26:00 PM
A beautifully written and poignant poem Carolyn. We live to love and without love we live a lonely life of longing. Your poem has a deep and powerful message. Love it and enjoyed it! :)
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Date: 9/24/2017 11:01:00 PM
A great write Carolyn, nice to see you back and alive and well. God bless:-)
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Date: 9/23/2017 10:45:00 PM
I like how the rich emotions intertwine with the images of a restless sea and sky. Great poem!
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Date: 9/23/2017 8:01:00 AM
I can feel longing and loneliness flowing through this beautiful poem, Carolyn. I find it very touching ... and to my faves it goes! Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/23/2017 2:08:00 AM
Wow...what a mind-blowing rhythm that flows so smoothly throughout the poem. Splendid job, Carolyn.
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Date: 9/21/2017 8:01:00 PM
wow, Carolyn, the storm really inspired a very good poem from you. I just love this one. FAVE.
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Date: 9/21/2017 8:01:00 PM
and another wow for the picture.
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Date: 9/20/2017 6:29:00 PM
like the call of a whip-poor-will, your poem sings its song of yearning....good to see you posting again...let your pen flow, my poetic friend...
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Date: 9/20/2017 4:23:00 PM
Happy to see you posting and feeling better.. An excellent poem.as always.. great use of language...
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Date: 9/20/2017 3:05:00 PM
Lovely poem, Carolyn. I've thought about getting a big sailboat with my husband, disconnecting from it all and just being free. Maybe someday.
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