Wind's soft sigh

wind’s soft     s   i   g    h 
through fields of marigolds . . .
butterflies dancing
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Croft Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 5:32 PM
Beautiful haiku congratulations
La France Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 2:26 PM
Andrea, beautifully written and congratulations on your placement in the contest ~
Poet Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 3:02 AM
This is truly extraordinary. Andrea, you have my utmost congratulations on your win! Wishing you a wonderful new year!
Kerr Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 12:48 AM
Congratulations, Andrea, on your success with this uplifting Haiku. It exudes awesome detail. Thanks for your recent visit to my page and for sharing your thoughts with me, Howard
Gasun Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 12:31 AM
This is magical. Big congrats on your win my dear poet friend! Hugs
Williams Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 3:49 PM
I really like your use of imagery here, Andrea. Congrats on your strong placement in this contest! :) Bartholomew
Kerr Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 2:21 PM
The perfect haiku if ever there was one, Andrea. Elegant scene capture and seamless flow. Many thanks for your opinion on winter snow, Howard
Gauthier Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 5:52 PM
a waltz of butterflies ~ so sweet
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 10:21 PM
Orangey yellow, sunrise, sunset, swiftly...Fiddler
Ashley Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 10:38 AM
Dear Andrea, you haiku captures a beautiful autumn moment with poetic precision and tender yet vibrant imagery. Congratulations for your success in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Poet Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 11:02 AM
beautifully penned!Congratulations!
Jones Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 5:26 PM
Love the imagery it is simply beautiful! Congratulations on your win!
Watts Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 2:13 PM
Hi Andrea a lovely Haiku with a good Satori finish Congratulations Cheers Christine
Barberis Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 8:35 AM
Another wonderful example of show, don't tell in a haiku poem. I'm partial to haiku because it is difficult to do well. Yours is a fave for me in the modern haiku category!
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 12:28 PM
Thanks so much, Beau
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October 20, 2025 at 3:31 PM
This haiku makes me sigh for the color rich beauty of it, Andrea! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings of autumn beauty to you!
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 12:28 PM
Thanks, Sam
Singh Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 8:55 AM
Blessed is the moment of seeing such beauty of nature Well written
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 12:28 PM
Thanks!
Grubb Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 8:17 AM
Smoothly constructed Ku. The spacing in “s i g h” feels like breath itself--a clever use of visual pause for contest flair. I can envision the butterflies airborne, arrhythmic like puppets on a string, searching for the right LZ (landing zone). Andrea, your piece breathes with motion and color...a flowing, living moment. Love it.
Dietrich Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 8:48 AM
Thanks for your thoughtful comment
George Avatar
October 19, 2025 at 7:15 PM
This is the time marigolds flower in our place. They are there in my garden too and I see butterflies flitting around. Beautiful.
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 12:30 PM
Thanks, dear
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October 19, 2025 at 2:11 AM
Wonderful. love it. God bless you always, love, Gina
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 12:30 PM
Thanks and same to you
Hind Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 2:23 PM
Very lovely image- <3
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 12:30 PM
Thanks
Godwin Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 12:21 PM
You're here, hi. Does this mean you either killed or fixed the TV? I'm about to get off. Sent gmail. This is loverly, so 3 on top, 5 bottom, interesting. I've moved not one letter of the alphabet for this contest.
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 4:58 PM
This is modern ku, which I prefer to 5 7 5. TV waiting to be reconnected. It's in email.
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