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Windows of Gold

Windows of gold shone bright from the garden The mist sits hovering on a slight white frost The fox tracks in the frost visible, without a pardon A blackbird and his wife sitting on the fence looking cold and lost. The sun rises the windows reflect the coming cold winters day The blackbird has spied the fox, so he’s not hopping down The fox appears, hungry; he is after some new fresh prey They spy each other the blackbird so black and his wife a dull brown The fox sits he’s waiting a while, he appears to be in no hurry The blackbird and his wife watch, with their heads on one side Chattering away a flap of wings to say, we’re safe we need not worry The fox just waits he watches blacky and his wife, and the fox her, he espied. The sun rose high the golden window disappears and turned to dull black The fox stands, he shakes his head, and he turns to walk away The brown bird now happy the fox has gone hops down, she doesn’t look back She hears her husband chattering; too late the fox has his breakfast for the day. As the sun rises it shines on the windows that began as burning gold A new day has started with new hope and promises anew Never turn your back on the lessons learnt and common senses untold The fox is waiting he needs to eat and his prey could be you. © 8/12/2012 ~GG~

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Date: 12/10/2012 4:02:00 PM
Hi Mandy, I love this vision of a fox through a golden window, good poem.
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Date: 12/11/2012 1:04:00 AM
Thanks Sheri, the sun hits the shed at the bottom of the garden at sunrise and it shines gold through them xx
Date: 12/9/2012 7:09:00 AM
lovely write with a message for us all at the end
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Date: 12/9/2012 7:45:00 AM
Thanks Jack, hugs to all xx
Date: 12/9/2012 6:58:00 AM
That Devil the sly old fox awaits his opportunity to prey upon one..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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Date: 12/9/2012 7:45:00 AM
He sure does Sara, he's just waiting xx
Date: 12/9/2012 5:56:00 AM
Very vivid and a good lesson. Thank you
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Date: 12/9/2012 6:05:00 AM
Thanks Bobb xx
Date: 12/8/2012 7:22:00 PM
Treed by a fox? / I think I'll pass / I'll watch safely / behind the glass. Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 12/9/2012 6:05:00 AM
To right Jon lol xx
Date: 12/8/2012 6:51:00 PM
Mandy a lesson to be learned within your poem.. A clever write, but I was sad for his wife. Warm smiles, always, Connie
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Date: 12/9/2012 6:06:00 AM
Always sad for the life lol Thanks Connie love xx
Date: 12/8/2012 6:38:00 PM
Nicely penned Mandy... best wishes ....hugs
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Date: 12/9/2012 6:07:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, hugs xx
Date: 12/8/2012 5:29:00 PM
Such a neat interplay with these critters Mandy ; they sound like humans I know! :)
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Date: 12/9/2012 6:08:00 AM
And me Elizabeth lol xx
Date: 12/8/2012 4:22:00 PM
Always aware, good moral story Mandy :D thank you for your greetings on my page, you really make my day :D
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Date: 12/9/2012 6:09:00 AM
Thanks Yanny, you too love make mine xx
Date: 12/8/2012 2:43:00 PM
What a way to start my afternoon Mandy enjoyed this reading..
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Date: 12/9/2012 6:10:00 AM
Thanks Carma xx
Date: 12/8/2012 2:28:00 PM
love how you bring nature to us all Mandy, a scenic wonder enhanced by your wonderful poetry...
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Date: 12/9/2012 6:11:00 AM
Thanks harry i am a country girl at heart xx
Date: 12/8/2012 2:05:00 PM
Hi Mandy, really enjoyed reading this work. Have to keep my eyes open for that crafty fox. Rollo
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Date: 12/9/2012 6:12:00 AM
You do that Rollo you never know where hestrikes next lol xx
Date: 12/8/2012 2:05:00 PM
Dear Mandy, I feel so close to YOU after reading YOUR POETRY thus far YOU have a way of making me feel YOUR thoughts. I'm not complaining LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal(Young) Liege...Harry - I think this is the second POEM of YOURS that was written in the future 8/12/2102 ~GG~
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Date: 12/9/2012 6:12:00 AM
i travel in time Harry lol and thanks for your super comments xx

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