Windows of Gold

Windows of gold shone bright from the garden
The mist sits hovering on a slight white frost
The fox tracks in the frost visible, without a pardon
A blackbird and his wife sitting on the fence looking cold and lost.

The sun rises the windows reflect the coming cold winters day
The blackbird has spied the fox, so he’s not hopping down
The fox appears, hungry; he is after some new fresh prey
They spy each other the blackbird so black and his wife a dull brown

The fox sits he’s waiting a while, he appears to be in no hurry
The blackbird and his wife watch, with their heads on one side
Chattering away a flap of wings to say, we’re safe we need not worry
The fox just waits he watches blacky and his wife, and the fox her, he espied.

The sun rose high the golden window disappears and turned to dull black
The fox stands, he shakes his head, and he turns to walk away
The brown bird now happy the fox has gone hops down, she doesn’t look back
She hears her husband chattering; too late the fox has his breakfast for the day.

As the sun rises it shines on the windows that began as burning gold
A new day has started with new hope and promises anew
Never turn your back on the lessons learnt and common senses untold
The fox is waiting he needs to eat and his prey could be you.

© 8/12/2012 ~GG~
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Harper Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 4:02 PM
Hi Mandy, I love this vision of a fox through a golden window, good poem.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 1:04 AM
Thanks Sheri, the sun hits the shed at the bottom of the garden at sunrise and it shines gold through them xx
Horne Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 7:09 AM
lovely write with a message for us all at the end
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 7:45 AM
Thanks Jack, hugs to all xx
Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 6:58 AM
That Devil the sly old fox awaits his opportunity to prey upon one..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 7:45 AM
He sure does Sara, he's just waiting xx
Boyd Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 5:56 AM
Very vivid and a good lesson. Thank you
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 6:05 AM
Thanks Bobb xx
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 7:22 PM
Treed by a fox? / I think I'll pass / I'll watch safely / behind the glass. Enjoyed your poem.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 6:05 AM
To right Jon lol xx
Gildersleeve Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 6:51 PM
Mandy a lesson to be learned within your poem.. A clever write, but I was sad for his wife. Warm smiles, always, Connie
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 6:06 AM
Always sad for the life lol Thanks Connie love xx
May Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 6:38 PM
Nicely penned Mandy... best wishes ....hugs
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 6:07 AM
Thanks Joseph, hugs xx
Wesley Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 5:29 PM
Such a neat interplay with these critters Mandy ; they sound like humans I know! :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 6:08 AM
And me Elizabeth lol xx
Widjanarko Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 4:22 PM
Always aware, good moral story Mandy :D thank you for your greetings on my page, you really make my day :D
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 6:09 AM
Thanks Yanny, you too love make mine xx
Sanderson Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 2:43 PM
What a way to start my afternoon Mandy enjoyed this reading..
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 6:10 AM
Thanks Carma xx
Horsman Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 2:28 PM
love how you bring nature to us all Mandy, a scenic wonder enhanced by your wonderful poetry...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 6:11 AM
Thanks harry i am a country girl at heart xx
Esquire Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 2:05 PM
Dear Mandy, I feel so close to YOU after reading YOUR POETRY thus far YOU have a way of making me feel YOUR thoughts. I'm not complaining LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal(Young) Liege...Harry - I think this is the second POEM of YOURS that was written in the future 8/12/2102 ~GG~
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 6:12 AM
i travel in time Harry lol and thanks for your super comments xx
West Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 2:05 PM
Hi Mandy, really enjoyed reading this work. Have to keep my eyes open for that crafty fox. Rollo
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 6:12 AM
You do that Rollo you never know where hestrikes next lol xx
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