Window To the World

He'd left home hit the open road free at last ~ the iron bars of his conscience his roadmap

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Michael Tor

Date: 8/30/2023 8:06:00 PM

Like the Eagles song "Already Gone" We live our lives in chains and we dont even know we have the key... Your wisdom is sneaking out again Gershon...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/31/2023 7:35:00 PM

Gob-smacker of a comment, Michael. Leaves me thinking. Thanks! ~ gw

David Fisher

Date: 8/28/2023 5:31:00 PM

This one hits it on the head. Wonder if those invisible bars made us yearn for the wet bars?

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/28/2023 6:33:00 PM

Wet bars?! They still have those?! ~ Stuck on Snickers Bars

Jan Allison

Date: 8/28/2023 3:49:00 PM

thought provoking piece GW hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/28/2023 6:34:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan! :) gw

John Lawless

Date: 8/28/2023 7:30:00 AM

OUCH!!! I guess we all carry too much extra baggage when we take off....

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/28/2023 6:36:00 PM

At least there's no charge for an extra bag on the open road!