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Wind Whistling Through the Trees

Wind whistling through the trees Reminds me of the tiny piccolo, High-pitched obbligatos, ranging free Wind whistling through the trees, blow The subtle sounds of spring’s arrival. Wavering tremolo, shimmering limbs Marked by winter storms for survival, Voices of ten-thousand sacred hymns Humming like soft Gregorian chants, Lingering briefly in the crown’s apse To gather all its sacred sycophants, Trembling in rapt reverence, perhaps, Until the breathy calm reverberates And moves beyond the sycamore While I pause alone to contemplate The crystalline tones, wanting more.
Written March 8, 2022

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Date: 3/9/2022 11:46:00 AM
A divine musical embrace with nature, filled with elegant beauty Milt!...ab
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/9/2022 4:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anselmo. You made my day!!!
Date: 3/9/2022 7:17:00 AM
A beautiful poem Milt.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/9/2022 8:11:00 AM
Thanks, Terry.
Date: 3/9/2022 5:56:00 AM
The amazing sounds made by nature, lovely to hear. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/9/2022 7:11:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. It's always a pleasure hearing from you and reading your comments to my poems.
Date: 3/8/2022 8:32:00 PM
Nice, Milt! Horizontal rain here. The tin whistles my Son in law is making in the barn have that breathy sound you describe, I can hear it!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/8/2022 8:52:00 PM
Yes, the wind through the trees does make a distinct whistling sound if you listen to it closely. Thanks for the read and the comment, Jeff.
Date: 3/8/2022 8:23:00 PM
'Voices of ten-thousand sacred hymns Humming like soft Gregorian chants',.... What lovely comparison ! With wind as focal point, to what all wonderful thoughts your poetic mind has moved in !
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/8/2022 8:31:00 PM
Thanks for your insightful comment, Valsa. I appreciate it.
Date: 3/8/2022 7:45:00 PM
Hi Milt, I echo what Marco said.Well done. Have a nice evening-Alexis
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/8/2022 8:31:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 3/8/2022 6:12:00 PM
Beautiful poem, my friend!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/8/2022 6:16:00 PM
Aw, thank you so much, Marco. I really appreciate your reading my work and making insightful comments. I'm happy you found this poem worthy of note.

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