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Wind That Blew

Once I talked to the wind that blew Ignoring me, like a free bird it flew. If the wind ever saw me I've no clue, Surely it didn't appear in my view. Softly then a breeze came through, Could it be the wind I just spoke to? Swirling, whirling, it whispered too Hinting of romance scripted for two. When dawn shined on morning dew Amber desires on horizon it drew In golden emotions on panoramic hue-- A portrait of love that beckoned you. Beneath the canopy of cobalt blue Roses bloomed, smiling as you do Cheering your arrival, lilting to woo-- Wind that blew was dream come true. June 27, 2019

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Valsa George

Date: 1/3/2022 3:34:00 AM

I feel the wind tousling my hair . What a cool feel this poem gives.... "Beneath the canopy of cobalt blue Roses bloomed, smiling as you do". I can see and feel it all.... Vijay!

Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/17/2020 2:01:00 PM

A clever poem, Vijay. I try to talk to the wind to, sometimes. Hope you have a great night :)

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 9/16/2019 9:42:00 PM

Too many colours surround our existence and I see all those through your poems. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2019 12:28:00 PM

this was a real gem, Vijay. I thought I was seeing all your poetry but this one somehow got past me. Congrats on your well deserved win this time around

John Hamilton

Date: 8/10/2019 6:44:00 PM

So nice Vijay, I'm not much of a fan of mono rhyme but you did well with this one, congrats!

Funom Makama

Date: 7/30/2019 1:41:00 PM

Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2019 8:01:00 AM

Thank you Funom..much appreciate.

Silent One

Date: 7/27/2019 6:49:00 AM

The poems flowed well, sometimes monrhyme can be difficult, but you did it very well..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2019 8:00:00 AM

Thank you Silent One.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/26/2019 3:15:00 PM

- So light and airy ... with beautiful romantic lines, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2019 8:00:00 AM

Much appreciate Anne-Lise..many thanks.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/16/2019 3:34:00 PM

Vijay, I love this. softly then a breeze came through, could it be the wind I just spoke to? LOVE.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/25/2019 12:12:00 PM

Thanks Jeanne..much appreciate.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/1/2019 7:14:00 AM

Hi Vijay, What a splendid "monorhyme" you penned! I really enjoyed it:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/1/2019 7:35:00 AM

Much appreciate, Alexis..many thanks.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/30/2019 7:25:00 AM

Your imagery brings beautiful romantic moments to mind, Vijay. ~ Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2019 2:29:00 PM

Thank you Paul..much appreciate. Regards.

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/29/2019 4:38:00 PM

I loved this journey through your poem, Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2019 7:01:00 AM

Thank you harry.

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/29/2019 7:49:00 AM

And you were standing near the elephants at the zoo lol...lovely verse Vijay...sending love...^WW^

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/30/2019 7:02:00 AM

Thank you WW.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/29/2019 5:11:00 AM

My friend, Vijay, it seems that nature has conspired to bring romance your way! Lovely writing! Joy to read!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2019 7:38:00 AM

Thank you my friend..always an honor to read your feedback.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/28/2019 9:27:00 PM

A lovely write from a lovely soul Panagiota

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2019 7:37:00 AM

Many thanks Panagiota..much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/28/2019 3:46:00 PM

Your poetry has its winds blowing in tune with a true poet's very creative and deep heart. Such a truly inspiring and positive piece on life love, and the wonderfulness of joy in life when love exists giving its immense blessings. A fav, a true beauty..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2019 7:36:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit Robert..always an honor to read your feedback..many thanks. Spacial thanks for the FAV.

Ann Foster

Date: 6/28/2019 10:35:00 AM

The wind... a lover... Oh yes... A lovely poem my friend. Ann

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2019 7:35:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments, Ann..many thanks my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/28/2019 12:37:00 AM

Hi Vijay, And the wind and breeze whisper gently telling their story, telling you that a love you have known will return - how romanticly perfectly and poetically you describe this to us, a real beauty Vijay! Your inspiration and imagination always soars to great heights - well penned my friend, Hugs, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/28/2019 7:29:00 AM

You are so very kind my friend..enjoyed reading your feedback..much appreciate your visit, Jennifer..many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/27/2019 8:25:00 PM

The wind-- it captivates me too. This is so beautiful and romantic. Perhaps an echo is whispering back to your heart- the melody of love. Through the light breeze. I shall place this in my favorites. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/28/2019 7:27:00 AM

Just a light verse..so glad to read your comments, as always..much appreciate Brandy..many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAV.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/27/2019 5:58:00 PM

I am glad your wind brought you the reality of beauty and serenity. If the wind didn't do it, your poetry surely would, love it Vij, oh happy day xo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/28/2019 7:24:00 AM

Glad to read your comments..much appreciate, Pixie..many thanks.