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Wind That Blew

Once I talked to the wind that blew
Ignoring me, like a free bird it flew.
If the wind ever saw me I've no clue,
Surely it didn't appear in my view.

Softly then a breeze came through,
Could it be the wind I just spoke to?
Swirling, whirling, it whispered too
Hinting of romance scripted for two.

When dawn shined on morning dew
Amber desires on horizon it drew
In golden emotions on panoramic hue--
A portrait of love that beckoned you.

Beneath the canopy of cobalt blue
Roses bloomed, smiling as you do
Cheering your arrival, lilting to woo--
Wind that blew was dream come true.

June 27,  2019

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Valsa George Date: 1/3/2022 3:34:00 AM I feel the wind tousling my hair . What a cool feel this poem gives.... "Beneath the canopy of cobalt blue Roses bloomed, smiling as you do". I can see and feel it all.... Vijay! Login to Reply

Angela Crabtree Date: 11/17/2020 2:01:00 PM A clever poem, Vijay. I try to talk to the wind to, sometimes. Hope you have a great night :) Login to Reply

Swetha Vangaveti Date: 9/16/2019 9:42:00 PM Too many colours surround our existence and I see all those through your poems. :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/11/2019 12:28:00 PM this was a real gem, Vijay. I thought I was seeing all your poetry but this one somehow got past me. Congrats on your well deserved win this time around Login to Reply

John Hamilton Date: 8/10/2019 6:44:00 PM So nice Vijay, I'm not much of a fan of mono rhyme but you did well with this one, congrats! Login to Reply

Funom Makama Date: 7/30/2019 1:41:00 PM Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/10/2019 8:01:00 AM Thank you Funom..much appreciate.

Silent One Date: 7/27/2019 6:49:00 AM The poems flowed well, sometimes monrhyme can be difficult, but you did it very well.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/10/2019 8:00:00 AM Thank you Silent One.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/26/2019 3:15:00 PM - So light and airy ... with beautiful romantic lines, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 8/10/2019 8:00:00 AM Much appreciate Anne-Lise..many thanks.

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 7/16/2019 3:34:00 PM Vijay, I love this. softly then a breeze came through, could it be the wind I just spoke to? LOVE. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/25/2019 12:12:00 PM Thanks Jeanne..much appreciate.

Alexis Y. Date: 7/1/2019 7:14:00 AM Hi Vijay, What a splendid "monorhyme" you penned! I really enjoyed it:-) Alexis Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 7/1/2019 7:35:00 AM Much appreciate, Alexis..many thanks.

Paul Callus Date: 6/30/2019 7:25:00 AM Your imagery brings beautiful romantic moments to mind, Vijay. ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/30/2019 2:29:00 PM Thank you Paul..much appreciate. Regards.

Harry Horsman Date: 6/29/2019 4:38:00 PM I loved this journey through your poem, Vijay Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/30/2019 7:01:00 AM Thank you harry.

Winged Warrior Date: 6/29/2019 7:49:00 AM And you were standing near the elephants at the zoo lol...lovely verse Vijay...sending love...^WW^ Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/30/2019 7:02:00 AM Thank you WW.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 6/29/2019 5:11:00 AM My friend, Vijay, it seems that nature has conspired to bring romance your way! Lovely writing! Joy to read! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/29/2019 7:38:00 AM Thank you my friend..always an honor to read your feedback.

Panagiota Romios Date: 6/28/2019 9:27:00 PM A lovely write from a lovely soul Panagiota Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/29/2019 7:37:00 AM Many thanks Panagiota..much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Robert Lindley Date: 6/28/2019 3:46:00 PM Your poetry has its winds blowing in tune with a true poet's very creative and deep heart. Such a truly inspiring and positive piece on life love, and the wonderfulness of joy in life when love exists giving its immense blessings. A fav, a true beauty.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/29/2019 7:36:00 AM Much appreciate your visit Robert..always an honor to read your feedback..many thanks. Spacial thanks for the FAV.

Ann Foster Date: 6/28/2019 10:35:00 AM The wind... a lover... Oh yes... A lovely poem my friend. Ann Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/29/2019 7:35:00 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Ann..many thanks my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 6/28/2019 12:37:00 AM Hi Vijay, And the wind and breeze whisper gently telling their story, telling you that a love you have known will return - how romanticly perfectly and poetically you describe this to us, a real beauty Vijay! Your inspiration and imagination always soars to great heights - well penned my friend, Hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/28/2019 7:29:00 AM You are so very kind my friend..enjoyed reading your feedback..much appreciate your visit, Jennifer..many thanks.

Brandy Nicole Date: 6/27/2019 8:25:00 PM The wind-- it captivates me too. This is so beautiful and romantic. Perhaps an echo is whispering back to your heart- the melody of love. Through the light breeze. I shall place this in my favorites. :) Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/28/2019 7:27:00 AM Just a light verse..so glad to read your comments, as always..much appreciate Brandy..many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAV.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 6/27/2019 5:58:00 PM I am glad your wind brought you the reality of beauty and serenity. If the wind didn't do it, your poetry surely would, love it Vij, oh happy day xo Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/28/2019 7:24:00 AM Glad to read your comments..much appreciate, Pixie..many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/27/2019 5:56:00 PM The wind circled back to find the whisper of your heart! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/28/2019 7:24:00 AM Much appreciate Kim--many thanks.

Heidi Sands Date: 6/27/2019 5:14:00 PM This is so nice. Like a mysterious encounter with the wind , that later brings a romantic return. Very nice Vijay. I enjoyed this :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/28/2019 7:23:00 AM Thank you Heidi..appreciate your visit and comments, as always. Haven't seen much of you lately. Hope all is well.

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 6/27/2019 4:31:00 PM Vijay, I love this one. Let the wind shine on you too! Wonderful. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/28/2019 7:22:00 AM Thank you for stopping by ..much appreciate, Jeanne.

Tom Cunningham Date: 6/27/2019 1:49:00 PM Seems the wind brought romance and love Vijay,well written verse. Tom Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/28/2019 7:21:00 AM Much appreciate Tom..many thanks.

Arturo Michael Date: 6/27/2019 1:30:00 PM Lucky you...for the wind that blew...I like what you wrote...it was light and breezy... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/28/2019 7:21:00 AM It was fun writing it..many thanks Arturo.