Vijay Pandit Poet Monorhyme

Wind That Blew

Once I talked to the wind that blew
Ignoring me, like a free bird it flew.
If the wind ever saw me I've no clue,
Surely it didn't appear in my view.

Softly then a breeze came through,
Could it be the wind I just spoke to?
Swirling, whirling, it whispered too
Hinting of romance scripted for two.

When dawn shined on morning dew
Amber desires on horizon it drew
In golden emotions on panoramic hue--
A portrait of love that beckoned you.

Beneath the canopy of cobalt blue
Roses bloomed, smiling as you do
Cheering your arrival, lilting to woo--
Wind that blew was dream come true.

June 27,  2019

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Valsa George January 3, 2022 at 3:34 AM I feel the wind tousling my hair . What a cool feel this poem gives.... "Beneath the canopy of cobalt blue Roses bloomed, smiling as you do". I can see and feel it all.... Vijay!

Angela Crabtree November 17, 2020 at 2:01 PM A clever poem, Vijay. I try to talk to the wind to, sometimes. Hope you have a great night :)

Swetha Vangaveti September 16, 2019 at 9:42 PM Too many colours surround our existence and I see all those through your poems. :)

Andrea Dietrich August 11, 2019 at 12:28 PM this was a real gem, Vijay. I thought I was seeing all your poetry but this one somehow got past me. Congrats on your well deserved win this time around

John Hamilton August 10, 2019 at 6:44 PM So nice Vijay, I'm not much of a fan of mono rhyme but you did well with this one, congrats!

Funom Makama July 30, 2019 at 1:41 PM Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great.. Vijay Pandit August 10, 2019 at 8:01 AM Thank you Funom..much appreciate.

Silent One July 27, 2019 at 6:49 AM The poems flowed well, sometimes monrhyme can be difficult, but you did it very well.. Vijay Pandit August 10, 2019 at 8:00 AM Thank you Silent One.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 26, 2019 at 3:15 PM - So light and airy ... with beautiful romantic lines, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit August 10, 2019 at 8:00 AM Much appreciate Anne-Lise..many thanks.

Jeanne Mcgee July 16, 2019 at 3:34 PM Vijay, I love this. softly then a breeze came through, could it be the wind I just spoke to? LOVE. Vijay Pandit July 25, 2019 at 12:12 PM Thanks Jeanne..much appreciate.

Alexis Y. July 1, 2019 at 7:14 AM Hi Vijay, What a splendid "monorhyme" you penned! I really enjoyed it:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit July 1, 2019 at 7:35 AM Much appreciate, Alexis..many thanks.

Paul Callus June 30, 2019 at 7:25 AM Your imagery brings beautiful romantic moments to mind, Vijay. ~ Regards // paul Vijay Pandit June 30, 2019 at 2:29 PM Thank you Paul..much appreciate. Regards.

Harry Horsman June 29, 2019 at 4:38 PM I loved this journey through your poem, Vijay Vijay Pandit June 30, 2019 at 7:01 AM Thank you harry.

Winged Warrior June 29, 2019 at 7:49 AM And you were standing near the elephants at the zoo lol...lovely verse Vijay...sending love...^WW^ Vijay Pandit June 30, 2019 at 7:02 AM Thank you WW.

Demetrios Trifiatis June 29, 2019 at 5:11 AM My friend, Vijay, it seems that nature has conspired to bring romance your way! Lovely writing! Joy to read! Vijay Pandit June 29, 2019 at 7:38 AM Thank you my friend..always an honor to read your feedback.

Panagiota Romios June 28, 2019 at 9:27 PM A lovely write from a lovely soul Panagiota Vijay Pandit June 29, 2019 at 7:37 AM Many thanks Panagiota..much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Robert Lindley June 28, 2019 at 3:46 PM Your poetry has its winds blowing in tune with a true poet's very creative and deep heart. Such a truly inspiring and positive piece on life love, and the wonderfulness of joy in life when love exists giving its immense blessings. A fav, a true beauty.. Vijay Pandit June 29, 2019 at 7:36 AM Much appreciate your visit Robert..always an honor to read your feedback..many thanks. Spacial thanks for the FAV.

Ann Foster June 28, 2019 at 10:35 AM The wind... a lover... Oh yes... A lovely poem my friend. Ann Vijay Pandit June 29, 2019 at 7:35 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Ann..many thanks my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos June 28, 2019 at 12:37 AM Hi Vijay, And the wind and breeze whisper gently telling their story, telling you that a love you have known will return - how romanticly perfectly and poetically you describe this to us, a real beauty Vijay! Your inspiration and imagination always soars to great heights - well penned my friend, Hugs, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit June 28, 2019 at 7:29 AM You are so very kind my friend..enjoyed reading your feedback..much appreciate your visit, Jennifer..many thanks.

Brandy Nicole June 27, 2019 at 8:25 PM The wind-- it captivates me too. This is so beautiful and romantic. Perhaps an echo is whispering back to your heart- the melody of love. Through the light breeze. I shall place this in my favorites. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit June 28, 2019 at 7:27 AM Just a light verse..so glad to read your comments, as always..much appreciate Brandy..many thanks. And a special thank you for the FAV.

Mystic Rose Rose June 27, 2019 at 5:58 PM I am glad your wind brought you the reality of beauty and serenity. If the wind didn't do it, your poetry surely would, love it Vij, oh happy day xo Vijay Pandit June 28, 2019 at 7:24 AM Glad to read your comments..much appreciate, Pixie..many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues June 27, 2019 at 5:56 PM The wind circled back to find the whisper of your heart! Vijay Pandit June 28, 2019 at 7:24 AM Much appreciate Kim--many thanks.

Heidi Sands June 27, 2019 at 5:14 PM This is so nice. Like a mysterious encounter with the wind , that later brings a romantic return. Very nice Vijay. I enjoyed this :) Vijay Pandit June 28, 2019 at 7:23 AM Thank you Heidi..appreciate your visit and comments, as always. Haven't seen much of you lately. Hope all is well.

Jeanne Mcgee June 27, 2019 at 4:31 PM Vijay, I love this one. Let the wind shine on you too! Wonderful. Vijay Pandit June 28, 2019 at 7:22 AM Thank you for stopping by ..much appreciate, Jeanne.

Tom Cunningham June 27, 2019 at 1:49 PM Seems the wind brought romance and love Vijay,well written verse. Tom Vijay Pandit June 28, 2019 at 7:21 AM Much appreciate Tom..many thanks.

Arturo Michael June 27, 2019 at 1:30 PM Lucky you...for the wind that blew...I like what you wrote...it was light and breezy... Vijay Pandit June 28, 2019 at 7:21 AM It was fun writing it..many thanks Arturo.