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Premiere Contest WinnerWind Talker

‘neath the halo of a full moon Wind Talker gives music to the night flute carved from a fallen tree he plays to the dwindling forest trees that remain and creatures losing habitat softly the melody resonates through the woods Wind Talker recalls stories handed down tribal legacies of prosperity, joy an era when animals were protected and revered glory days of spiritual people proud Native Americans who honored their culture cast away even as treaties were signed so much has been lost so much clad in soft skins Wind Talker wishes for what might have been if settlers had never made their way to his land yes, the land is his it always will be; this he knows his heart’s sadness emanates from Wind Talker’s flute development is approaching, encroaching more houses, more highways fewer trees, less land for animals to roam freely resignation sets in no way to reclaim the past ceremonial drums fade in the distance so much has been lost so much
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dutta Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 8:10 AM
I have not followed this poem timely. Now got the chance to look. Just overwhelmed.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 12:10 PM
Carolyn, you have touched the hearts of many with this poignant poem that is so deserving of your trophy win. I could feel the pain of loss so profoundly with your words. Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo
Ashley Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 11:10 AM
Carolyn, I enjoyed being captivated by your poem’s poignant and haunting beauty. Your verses stirred my heart as well as my imagination. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved trophy win. Warmest wishes always my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
Agustin Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 2:37 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent! (By the way, thanks for my placement in your sponsored contest. Thanks likewise for the comments. I did make a revision for the syllable counts). God bless you!
Barden Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 2:34 AM
I have so little time to read and comment right now, (hoping it improves soon), but I had to peruse this one, and I'm so glad I did! This is gorgeous, my friend, and is a cause that I hold dear to my heart, (as I once organized a petition for a Native American National Holiday) ... the phrasing, flow, word use, imagery - everything, really, is absolutely beautiful, and it is going into my favs immediately! Congrats on your well-deserved Trophy Win, Dear Poet - blessings! :-) <3
May Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 12:00 AM
Carolyn, Congratulations on your WIN, awesome poem my friend!!
Awtry Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 10:56 PM
Carolyn, congratulations on your trophy win!
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 10:39 PM
Back with congrats on your gold medal win, Caeolyn.
Proxenos Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 12:44 PM
Hi Carolyn, I stumbled upon this gem of yours from 2011, Wow! Very sad, I have a similar one but nowhere near as good, that I've done round about the same time, but have not posted, doubt I will having read this, its awesome, its amazing and unfortunately happening and so true Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Canerdy Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 5:39 PM
Carolyn, CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! GREAT! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 4:07 PM
A lovely tribute, Carolyn. Love it. Congrats on your win.
Toney Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 3:40 PM
Carolyn, nice tribute to the legacy of Native Americans, while at the same time highlighting injustices that they continue to suffer. I see you wrote this some years ago, and I appreciate you sharing it again since this is the first time I've seen it. Congrats on your win on mile 10 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest! By continuing to place in the contest you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
Harper Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 2:51 PM
Carolyn, excellent use of imagery and good contrast between the stanzas and good emotion and message. Congratulations on your win, thanks much for entering my contest.
Eastman Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 10:08 AM
Stirring write. Congratulations on your 1st round win in the PoetrySoup International Contest. A write very worthy of consideration and thought.
Henderson Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 9:02 PM
Good luck in the contest.
Henderson Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 9:02 PM
Yes, I'm biased to the native american also. So, mucjh persecution....... still.
Gorelick Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 8:35 PM
Now this one I remember..loved it then and now..congrats. BG
Austin Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 2:41 PM
Congrats on a double placement, Carolyn. Wind talker is one of your best. Love, daver
Poet Avatar
May 8, 2011 at 11:06 AM
Thanks Carolyn for your ever inspiring comments at my pages.....
Zzzzz Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 2:37 PM
Indeed, so much has been lost. The western world is steeped in corporate greed, and those who live simply and happily off the land have suffered badly, in all continents. A powerful and heartfelt write. Kind regards, Robert.
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March 24, 2011 at 10:42 PM
Congratulations my friend for your win and writing a beautiful poem as well with great imagery in every line that definitely tells the story,,,and Thank You again and again for all your visits upon my words and for the lovely words that you left behind,,Blessings..Cecil
Neels Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 11:44 AM
Hey Carolyn congratulations on your awesome win in Constance's contest, love Wilma
Taylor Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 7:14 AM
Congrats on a well written, well deserve 2nd Place, Carolyn. Beautiful. Enjoyed. Nice going. xxxRalph
Mehta Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 1:02 PM
Congratulaions on the second place win in the contest of Constance, Carolyn
Haick Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations on your superb 2nd Place win in Constance's "Tell His Story" Contest, Carolyn! So well-written and you manage to capture all that it seems he would have been concerned about in this poem! Love, Annalise
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