Wind Storm

forest storm winds warn in loud bellows and whispers ~ trees vertical plight

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Joseph May

Date: 1/7/2024 12:21:00 PM

Those winds swirl around to make them dance, Nice haiku

Mark Koplin

Date: 9/16/2023 2:55:00 PM

A nice stormy haiku

Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/16/2023 4:09:00 PM

Mark, thank you.

Terry Flood

Date: 9/16/2023 2:37:00 PM

If I ever learn to compose music, Tania, my first composition is gonna be ‘The plight of the vertical’. Love it.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/16/2023 4:09:00 PM

Terry, thank you.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/16/2023 11:12:00 AM

You packed a lot into three lines Tania. Stunning imagery. Tom

Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/16/2023 1:41:00 PM

Tom, thank you, hugs.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/16/2023 10:56:00 AM

what a descriptive haiku Tania:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/16/2023 11:09:00 AM

Jan, thank you, hugs.

Lin Lane

Date: 9/16/2023 10:51:00 AM

Excellent Haiku, Tania! Winds both bellow and whisper, sometimes quite eerily. I'm sure you're hearing it right now with Lee headed your way. Be safe.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/16/2023 11:10:00 AM

Lin, thank you, Lee is winding down a bit, hoping to not lose power, hugs.