Wind Songs

Descant hums of air, Reverberate the forest; A wind lullaby.

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 5/25/2009 3:08:00 PM

Nothing like a breeze making the trees sing softly. Vince

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/21/2009 10:36:00 PM

Beautiful Raul! Hey you have mail. Nate

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/21/2009 8:04:00 AM

Yes, this one is perfect too ... love that descant hums

Brandy Megens

Date: 5/20/2009 11:54:00 AM

ON A PERFECT DAY THE SOUND WOULD HYPNOTISE ME GREAT WORDS

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 5/18/2009 11:30:00 PM

the melodies of the wind are nice to listen to while swaying in a hammock. beautiful.

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 5/18/2009 10:27:00 AM

You can really drive a person's mind into a forest with such an imagery like that.Thank you on commenting on my poem,coming from a person with such vivid work.

Constance La France

Date: 5/17/2009 9:14:00 AM

The air is a lullaby, one just has to take the time to listen, well done, such beauty in a few words

Robin Maughan

Date: 5/16/2009 5:21:00 PM

I just love Haiku and yours!!I really need to work on that... thanks for the feedback.. Hugs, Robin

Diane Christian

Date: 5/16/2009 11:45:00 AM

a great poem, thanks for all your kind comments on my poetry God bless you from diane

P Sheart

Date: 5/16/2009 7:47:00 AM

Hi Raul What a outstanding haiku! I can hear the lullaby of the wind and it's so soothing and calm as it reverberates throught the forest! Living in Alaska the forest is my garden my sanctuary so I know just what you mean! Thanks for sharing this lullaby with us. So much talent indeed! Take care hun. Many blessings to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/16/2009 6:54:00 AM

You are the master of haiku Raul. Each one seems to be a masterpiece. Always brilliant. Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 5/16/2009 12:58:00 AM

Beautiful lyrical music Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcom comments

Shannon Mcgrath

Date: 5/15/2009 9:22:00 PM

really creative nice use of words... LOVE IT!!!

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/15/2009 3:31:00 PM

To the master of the haiku....this is another lovely example! ~ Carrie

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/15/2009 1:30:00 PM

Just a wonderful Haiku! Laura :) I love the last line!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/15/2009 1:13:00 PM

yes! I admit I had to dictionary "descant" but yes! armed w/knowledge! I got the feel for your haiku!! descant describes the undertone of the wind accompaniment!! cool!! Raul...and thanks for fun comments! Jim

Daniel Neal

Date: 5/15/2009 12:40:00 PM

nice haiku , I learn something new every time I read your work DN

Sean Kelly

Date: 5/15/2009 12:35:00 PM

Excellent Haiku , Raul . You really have become a master of these short concise pieces ..

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/15/2009 12:28:00 PM

Beautiful writing my friend.. I feel like I repeating myself of late with your poems....you are a talent.