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WRITTEN FOR ARTHUR VASO

we cannot see it its odour is all around baked bean flatulence 25th April 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/12/2015 5:52:00 PM
Ah, so this how Arturo gets all the ladies!!! lol
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/12/2015 5:55:00 PM
Arthur is the most amazing poet ... I am surprised he's not been snapped up by one of his admirers here - long as he doesnt pass wind in their presence of course:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/29/2015 2:02:00 PM
What happened to the gentle breeze?
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Date: 4/29/2015 2:21:00 PM
Turned in to a stinking gale force wind! Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/26/2015 7:11:00 AM
If it made noise,must have been shameful,but darn this seems like one od those silent stinky ones : ).Im trying to find the connection between arthur and the bakedbeans now lol : ). Killing senryu : )
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Date: 4/26/2015 7:17:00 AM
He just amended my original SENSIBLE haiku about wind and mentioned chilli so I just had a bit of fun with this one:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/25/2015 8:25:00 PM
Wow.. Am I really reading this.. Your fabulous Senryu stinks ;)
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Date: 4/26/2015 4:33:00 AM
LOL Love that comment Dave:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/25/2015 1:54:00 PM
What a riot! I'm sure Arthur will enjoy this one too, Hon. Thanks again for the mail concerning my typo. Just one letter off and you get something totally different. :( Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/25/2015 2:01:00 PM
ha ha ha Carolyn but WHAT a typo it was! Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/25/2015 10:50:00 AM
Jan you can never get enough of the fart poems...lol
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Date: 4/25/2015 11:23:00 AM
You calling me an old fart Tim lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/25/2015 10:14:00 AM
A real "toot" of a poem that makes us take life a little less seriously and with a shrug after all S-it happens! Emile.
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Date: 4/25/2015 11:23:00 AM
Great attitude Emile - I try to bring humour into my poems as much as possible - there is enough doom and gloom in some of the poems here to have me rushing for some sort of therapy:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/25/2015 10:04:00 AM
Now why did I know that two Winds couldn't be the same :P hugs//James xx
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Date: 4/25/2015 11:21:00 AM
ha ha ha - you know me James if there is a humourous aspect i will go with it:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/25/2015 8:27:00 AM
LMAO
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Date: 4/25/2015 8:29:00 AM
Thanks Jack:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/25/2015 8:11:00 AM
Cute one..Those beans are tough..Reads like a winner..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/25/2015 8:12:00 AM
Just a fun write prompted by a comment by the lovely Mr Vaso:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/25/2015 7:47:00 AM
lol...Nice one Jan....
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Date: 4/25/2015 7:54:00 AM
LOL Thanks Joseph:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/25/2015 7:01:00 AM
Ha ha...so there was an explosion...perfect pic to go with the poem...lol
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Date: 4/25/2015 7:16:00 AM
LOL Nandita - finding the pic was most amusing:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 4/25/2015 5:10:00 AM
LOL! Are you back on the subject? hahaha
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Date: 4/25/2015 5:21:00 AM
I got a mail from Arthur ... and who can resist a different take on the theme - reminds me of a student I used to work with I secretly called him 'beanz boy' - we used to have to open the classroom windows it was that bad lol:-) Hugs Jan xx