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WRITTEN FOR ARTHUR VASO

Wind Ii

we cannot see it
its odour is all around
baked bean flatulence

25th April 2015

humoroussenryu

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Etienne Lariviere

Date: 5/12/2015 5:52:00 PM

Ah, so this how Arturo gets all the ladies!!! lol

Jan Allison
Date: 5/12/2015 5:55:00 PM

Arthur is the most amazing poet ... I am surprised he's not been snapped up by one of his admirers here - long as he doesnt pass wind in their presence of course:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/29/2015 2:02:00 PM

What happened to the gentle breeze?

Jan Allison
Date: 4/29/2015 2:21:00 PM

Turned in to a stinking gale force wind! Hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/26/2015 7:11:00 AM

If it made noise,must have been shameful,but darn this seems like one od those silent stinky ones : ).Im trying to find the connection between arthur and the bakedbeans now lol : ). Killing senryu : )

Jan Allison
Date: 4/26/2015 7:17:00 AM

He just amended my original SENSIBLE haiku about wind and mentioned chilli so I just had a bit of fun with this one:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/25/2015 1:54:00 PM

What a riot! I'm sure Arthur will enjoy this one too, Hon. Thanks again for the mail concerning my typo. Just one letter off and you get something totally different. :( Love, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 4/25/2015 2:01:00 PM

ha ha ha Carolyn but WHAT a typo it was! Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 4/25/2015 10:50:00 AM

Jan you can never get enough of the fart poems...lol

Jan Allison
Date: 4/25/2015 11:23:00 AM

You calling me an old fart Tim lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/25/2015 10:14:00 AM

A real "toot" of a poem that makes us take life a little less seriously and with a shrug after all S-it happens! Emile.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/25/2015 11:23:00 AM

Great attitude Emile - I try to bring humour into my poems as much as possible - there is enough doom and gloom in some of the poems here to have me rushing for some sort of therapy:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 4/25/2015 10:04:00 AM

Now why did I know that two Winds couldn't be the same :P hugs//James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/25/2015 11:21:00 AM

ha ha ha - you know me James if there is a humourous aspect i will go with it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 4/25/2015 8:27:00 AM

LMAO

Jan Allison
Date: 4/25/2015 8:29:00 AM

Thanks Jack:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/25/2015 8:11:00 AM

Cute one..Those beans are tough..Reads like a winner..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 4/25/2015 8:12:00 AM

Just a fun write prompted by a comment by the lovely Mr Vaso:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 4/25/2015 7:47:00 AM

lol...Nice one Jan....

Jan Allison
Date: 4/25/2015 7:54:00 AM

LOL Thanks Joseph:-) Hugs jan xx

Nandita Das

Date: 4/25/2015 7:01:00 AM

Ha ha...so there was an explosion...perfect pic to go with the poem...lol

Jan Allison
Date: 4/25/2015 7:16:00 AM

LOL Nandita - finding the pic was most amusing:-) Hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/25/2015 5:10:00 AM

LOL! Are you back on the subject? hahaha

Jan Allison
Date: 4/25/2015 5:21:00 AM

I got a mail from Arthur ... and who can resist a different take on the theme - reminds me of a student I used to work with I secretly called him 'beanz boy' - we used to have to open the classroom windows it was that bad lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

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