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WIND CHIMES IN NOVEMBER

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The meteorologist gestures grandly at his map~ meanwhile, my knees whisper clandestine truths in Morse code crackles. The barometer lies, but my hips remember every coming storm with impeccable timing, like a retired sea captain who still smells salt in the wind. Seventy years, and the best forecast comes from vertebrae chiming like wind chimes in November.
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Gauthier Avatar
January 2, 2026 at 5:40 PM
Delightful, Sara ~ aging has its advantages I guess...
DiMino Avatar
December 31, 2025 at 10:53 PM
Yep, I can relate. Don't need the weather report to know when a front is coming in, and rain soon. Oh well. We grin and bear it. All we can do. And write poetry.
Hind Avatar
December 31, 2025 at 7:35 PM
I appreciate this, although there's a big age different, it's beautiful
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