Premiere Contest WinnerWind and Wave, Franz von Stuck

I am aching wave
wrapped exquisitely 
in spinel-warm strength
of you, my numero uno ~
the raven-winged wind,
as mind muses and melts
into the secretive sea
of the heart’s throb
for you ~ O selfless soul-flame,
my reason to reawaken
the ruby-rose reassurance
through restlessness,
holding the ardent
heat around my heart,
pulling my pulse patiently
to save me from sinking
into siren's streams…

I long to float forever ~
fearlessly falling in love
with the dripping citrine drops
glazing the pensive purity
of my purple paragon,
listening to limerence
as tides twirl and tango
around your toned torso,
breathing on the tip
of turning time ~
as we are engrossed
in an ethereal dream
where masculinity is moved
by the feathers of femininity ~
darkness drowns within
golden tears of gloaming
while yin yearns to ebb with yang,
pulsing amidst
            paradoxical urges...

        d e v o t i o n 
is neither dusk nor dawn,
but the singing silhouette
beneath swirling serenity ~
the seraphic sight
of the wind wedding the wave,
painting primal passion ~
a picturesque polarity,
pressed into
the stoic palms
of patronal permanence ~
dissolving the inescapable distance
between darkness
and divinity 
allowing nuances of nature
to culminate 
in the calming cadence
that softens despair’s depth
like evening blush ~
a sparkling kiss
skimming zealous water...
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Vipond  Avatar
September 16, 2026 at 8:50 PM
So much to like.. "dissolving the inescapable distance between darkness and divinity" Gorgeously deep. Cx
George Avatar
September 15, 2026 at 9:17 PM
I don't know how to praise you for gracing us with your sublime poetry. You stay afloat over everyone else buoyed by the waves of imagination while many of us stay at the bottom unable to rise. "d e v o t i o n is neither dusk nor dawn, but the singing silhouette beneath swirling serenity ~ the seraphic sight of the wind wedding the wave," This love between the wind and wave, the marriage of yin and yang can't be better expressed. ❤️ "as we are engrossed in an ethereal dream where masculinity is moved by the feathers of femininity ~ darkness drowns within"..... What an ethereal moment. Sorry, I don't get time always to enjoy your celestial strains. A Hearty Congratulations dear EMPRESS ( to me you are ever the Empress of poetry with few to come closer to you.) on your trophy win.👏👍Into my FAVE
Oimbo Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 4:24 PM
Great. Do you really long to float forever?
Oimbo Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 10:42 PM
That is good
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 2:49 AM
What if i respond to this and you never see? Hmm would I be talkin to the air? Well, yes! As a maldivian who loves swimming, sometimes I float, just lost watching the clouds pass, and the blues, and I say out loud, i long to float forever! Verbatim ~ Thank you for your question
MITRA Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 10:37 PM
Inscrutable Ink, Methinks ’tis somewhat unfair of thee to enter the lists against poor poets, for few among our tribe possess so rare a marriage of verse and design—wherein the quill doth sing whilst the eye is made to marvel. Yet here we are… 🤔 ✨'Sol ne’er scorns the humble tarpers-down.'✨ 😄 Mine lighter jests aside—thou dost, in truth, 'honour the crown far more than ever the crown could honour thee.' So keep thy hues a-spillin’, thy ink a-roarin’, and thy wondrous alchemy of verse and vision running gloriously wild! 🔥
Borg Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 3:09 PM
I would love to know where all these, meaningful, magical words in your poems come from. Also, have you got a shelf big enough to hold all the trophies you have so deservedly won? Congratulations Empress, please continue to impress.
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 2:50 AM
I am tempted to get a shelf now lol thank you dear Pascal! You are so kind Sending you light always
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 10:38 PM
Back with big congrats on this trophy win, Inky. I knew it would place high when I first saw it. ❤️🔥👏
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 3:09 AM
Awwm i never thought i would ~ honored sweet soul aunt Hugssziesx
Crandall Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 11:05 AM
Passionate imagery - how do you come up with all these words and images? I hadn't been familiar with Franz Von Stuck, but I just browsed through his some of his stuff on the Internet - pretty cool.
Empress Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 12:00 AM
It helps to be and remain in love with Poetry dear David. Alot of what I write are conversations with my muse ~ inner ramblings Thank you so much for visiting Its always a pleasure Sending you light
DiMino Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 8:48 PM
"as we are engrossed in an ethereal dream where masculinity is moved by the feathers of femininity" -- Sensitive imagery. "the seraphic sight of the wind wedding the wave, painting primal passion ~ " -- Captivating imagery. Another fine work by a splendid artist. Always appreciate your posting. Thank you.
Empress Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 12:10 AM
Thank you so very much dear Jo I appreciate also your sincere support Sending you light always
Kerr Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 11:31 AM
A whirlpool of stupenduous and sumptuous writing. I gaze at its elegant magnificense. High tides of metaphor rich, alliteration awesome creative chapters that edify. Adore “painting primal passion,”with the dripping citrine drops,” but each line shines, Ink.🔥🔥⭐⭐ Light and warmth, Howard
Empress Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 12:22 AM
Thank you so much dear Howard For your support Appreciate your kindness Sending you light always
Sharma  Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 1:43 AM
A favvveee ofcourseee 🧚 🧚 🧜‍♀️ 🧜‍♀️ 💋 💫 🌙 Sending you love and hugssszzzz
Empress Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 12:28 AM
awm thank you my angelic star for the fave ~ always grateful for your support truly 🧜‍♀️ 🧚‍♀️
Sharma  Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 1:42 AM
"that softens despair’s depth like evening blush ~ a sparkling kiss skimming zealous water..." What can I even say? Those ending lines are absolutely chef's kiss.. gawshhhh and sparkling kissesssss couldn't get any better! Love the z and s sounds there.. 😍😍 And the whole atmosphere here is nothing just pure soothe ~ Absolutely a pleasure reading you always and it's like a luxurious time spent on meaningful wizardry of words! How I loveee reading your poems everytime 💎 💎 🫂 🌊
Empress Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 12:29 AM
Sometimes I read your comments and sit in awe overwhelmed with gratitude! Not able to find the right words to express how thankful I am Thank you so much Sincerely Sending you light always
Sharma  Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 1:38 AM
Verryyy trueee! Devotion is neither dusk nor dawn! Rather it is the diamond dust serenity that sings of soulful sunsets and more! This just hits on a very soulful level! GOSHHH.. the romantic aura.. the love flowing throughout..and also the yin and yang energy .. everything is absolutely flawless here.. your phraseology is just impeccable as always and "O selfless soul-flame, my reason to reawaken the ruby-rose reassurance through restlessness," Ahhh left me speechless as ever! The techniques and alliteration here just feel meticulously layered.. I've jus written a poem and as always I found so many words syncing and similar haha! Well!
Empress Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 12:30 AM
Awwwnnn Yes we do use similar feminine words Haha Sending you light always
Gibbons Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 10:51 PM
As always dear ink powerful 🔥write ✍️ I just love how your ink flows so magnificently from depth of your heart n soul ❤️ " as my mind muses and melts" " secretive sea of the heart's throb for you" 🔥" ethereal dream where masculinity is moved by the feathers 🪶 of femininity ~" breathtaking image. I could pick out lots lack of characters just stop me 😎 but beloved friend ink I love it all must fav it's so true of the actual painting 👏✍️😘🧜‍♀️🧜‍♀️🦄🦄💕✨️🦋🐦‍🔥
Empress Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 12:31 AM
Awwn thank you sweet soul my scottish viking venus star! I am in debt honestly for your faithful support! You are a gem I was saying the other day Will i ever find forever friends And then You commented calling me forever friend! It moves me! Like a sign from God! Sendin you sweet light always 🦄 🧜‍♀️ 💫 😘
Smith  Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 8:18 PM
A mesmerising ekphrasis: the poem’s flowing, wave-like free verse and luxuriant gemstone palette give love an elemental, almost mythic force. The widening spaces, ellipses, and the beautifully isolated “d e v o t i o n” let the visual form enact the lovers’ pull and pause, while wind and water become a radiant union of yin and yang.☯️
Hind Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 5:55 PM
wow, moves like the sea itself, Ink- gorgeous!!
Rodgers Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 4:43 PM
Dear Empress, What can I say but an astonishing, voluptuous, and deeply sensual translation of Franz von Stuck’s symbolist artwork into Empress language. I think that pairing, "masculinity moved by the feathers of femininity," is a wonderful subversion of power. It shifts the dynamic from conquest to mutual surrender, where yin and yang ebb together into a single, breathing rhythm. Defining devotion not as dusk or dawn, but as the "singing silhouette beneath swirling serenity," grounds all that primal passion in a sense of eternal permanence. Empress, I believe this is a masterful, atmospheric, and exquisitely crafted piece of Faving Franz art! Blessings, Daniel
Empress Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 6:48 AM
Thank you so much dear Daniel Appreciate your support Sending you light always
Dietrich Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 3:07 PM
Wow. The wind wedding the wave. That part of your poem really brought out the strength of the artwork's title. So many great alliterative phrases in this one. Feminine and masculine coming together. So romantic , Inky. A big like for this one ❤️
Empress Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 6:46 AM
Awwn thank you sweet soul aunt Can you ASAP check your email! Xx
Kavanagh  Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 1:40 PM
So many paradoxical urges going on here Ink, this one is beautiful and fully loaded with everything needed for a good time; the wind is feeling lucky as is the sea lol! I can only imagine half of PS diving in, the other half are already there, (as we are engrossed in an ethereal dream) you did say you had an epiphany the other day, the revelation may be revealed here, gotta be a fave, cheers David
Empress Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 1:55 PM
Thank you so much for the visit and fave dear David! Haha about the epiphany. I didnt write about it cus the moment passed too quickly 😂 I must however revisit that moment hahah 😱 Appreciate you reading into this! I needed to write this badly! LG contributed a citrine stone too 💎 lol Sending you light always ~
Onpaper Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 12:30 PM
I am aching wave wrapped exquisitely in spinel-warm strength of you,oooh yesss speak to me in wonderful warmth!!! my numero uno!!! Ooooh!!! U r my uno , Quattro, mucho buenoooo!!! KINDER BUENOOOO!! selfless soul-flame, my reason to reawaken the ruby-rose reassurance through restlessness,oh yesss the alliterationsssss!!! Keep em comiiiiin papi 😉..I long to float forever fearlessly falling in love.. i tooo shall float with u papi!!! with the dripping citrine drops glazing the pensive purity.. O_O….. my my .. this sea is like the purest form of the sun ae ??? ehem!!!!That’s y become siren stream ae. I need ice cubes !!!CHILD WERE THE HOLLY WATER AT? 🕊️breathing on the tip of turning time.. oh my tips r definitely breathing rn!!! darkness drowns within golden tears … let me use a shovel to store this gold tears !!. Better than a bowl of broken bronze ballads ae… 😂..dissolving the inescapable distance no dissolving anymore aeee .. we painting primal passion!! TO THE CANVAS PAPI…
Empress Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 1:23 PM
🤫 😆 Hahahah u feel me papi
G  Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 11:25 AM
There isn't time enough to get immersed - I keep getting to the end and wanting to re-read from the top! I'm loving the warmth that comes through - you really do feel all your cares being washed away, even when intending to heed the warning of the "sirens streams" - love it all! There are so many word pairings and sequential flows that I'm lost to the sparkling kisses myself!
G  Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 11:50 AM
Haha wow! That's good to know 😍 a little sunshine and gold is always a good thing 🥰
Empress Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 11:46 AM
😂 citrine brings 💴 it seems hahah lol 😱
G  Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 11:44 AM
I did! Proud I could contribute the semi precious stone idea 🌞
Empress Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 11:38 AM
Did you notice the citrine drops ahhah ahh 🥹when the queen visits its an honor. I needed to desperately weave this one Thank you so much!!! 😱 Sending you light always my fave friend
Liguori Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 11:11 AM
Each line has its own merit; too hard for me to pick out one that rises above the rest. You are an amazing writer Ink. With that being said, I do like, ‘ allowing nuances of nature to culminate in the calming cadence’ !!
Empress Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 11:39 AM
Thank you so much dear Robert Sending you light always ~
Lane Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 10:57 AM
I shall return the favor you offer my poetry and highlight my favorite lines or phrases...Promise not to paste your whole poem...🤔 "secretive sea of the heart's throb" ~ "where masculinity is moved by the feathers of femininity" ~ "the seraphic sight of the wind wedding the wave." Tantalizing words for any hungry for love heart to hear. Enjoy your travels! ⭐🌙
Empress Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 11:05 AM
Thank you so much ~ please do have a look at the artpiece! Its beautiful! I would love to see you write something for it I am goin to drop in here n there linnersz when I can I am grateful for your support, sincerely Sending you light alwaysz Hugszzxzz
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