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The Wind Whispers

The Wind Whispers 'Wake up my love', the sweet cool wind whispers, 'Inhale in my celestial fragrance, stolen from your Night jasmine that shyly sways and quivers, Delighting every tired traveller by your arbour'. October 22, 2015 Contest: Best Short Acrostic Poems Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Hansteven Selfa

Date: 1/12/2016 8:09:00 AM

Congratulations on the win Balveen! :)

Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/15/2016 9:28:00 AM

Thanks Hanksteven!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/10/2016 2:33:00 PM

Many congrats on your win Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/15/2016 9:29:00 AM

Jan, thank you so much!

Jean Mcloughlin

Date: 1/10/2016 2:22:00 PM

Many congrats on your acrostic win Balveen! From Jean

Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/15/2016 9:30:00 AM

Thanks four visit and appreciation Jean!

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/9/2016 8:49:00 PM

A beautifully worded acrostic, Balveen! Congrats on your placement in the contest! Love, Kim

Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/15/2016 9:31:00 AM

Thanks Kim for your appreciation!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 1/9/2016 5:59:00 PM

How beautiful is this acrostic, Balveen! When you have some time, please stop by a piece that I wrote called "Night-Blooming Jasmine." Congratulations, my friend on your sweet win! Pandita

Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/15/2016 9:35:00 AM

Pandita, I surely will do so! I have two of these trees which is so fragrant that passers by even pick up it fallen flowers! Thanks all the same!

James Inman

Date: 1/9/2016 4:22:00 PM

Lovely poem Balveen. I think we share a true love for flowers.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/15/2016 9:36:00 AM

Thanks James! Nice to hear that you also love flowers!

Skat A

Date: 1/9/2016 3:50:00 PM

Balveen, Congrats on your ACROSTIC POEM... SKAT

Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/15/2016 9:36:00 AM

Thanks Skat!

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/9/2016 7:28:00 AM

So lovely and romantic, and your poem reads like a soft and fragrant gentle breeze. Congratulations on your placement, Balveen. Hugs, Sandra

Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/9/2016 8:40:00 AM

Thank you so much Sandra dearest!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/8/2016 11:41:00 PM

Jasmine has the most glorious scent Balveen. You have outdone yourself in this beautiful romantic tribute! Congratulations on your placement. We have jasmine growing in our front and back yards. #7 Cheers, Connie

Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/9/2016 8:41:00 AM

Oh Connie, how sweetly worded! Thanks ever do much!