Balveen Cheema Poet Acrostic

The Wind Whispers

The Wind Whispers 


'Wake up my love', the sweet cool wind whispers,
'Inhale in my celestial fragrance, stolen from your
Night jasmine that shyly sways and quivers,
Delighting every tired traveller by your arbour'.

October 22, 2015
Contest: Best Short Acrostic Poems
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Hansteven Selfa January 12, 2016 at 8:09 AM Congratulations on the win Balveen! :) Balveen Cheema January 15, 2016 at 9:28 AM Thanks Hanksteven!

Jan Allison January 10, 2016 at 2:33 PM Many congrats on your win Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx Balveen Cheema January 15, 2016 at 9:29 AM Jan, thank you so much!

Jean Mcloughlin January 10, 2016 at 2:22 PM Many congrats on your acrostic win Balveen! From Jean Balveen Cheema January 15, 2016 at 9:30 AM Thanks four visit and appreciation Jean!

Kim Merryman January 9, 2016 at 8:49 PM A beautifully worded acrostic, Balveen! Congrats on your placement in the contest! Love, Kim Balveen Cheema January 15, 2016 at 9:31 AM Thanks Kim for your appreciation!

Pandita Sietesantos January 9, 2016 at 5:59 PM How beautiful is this acrostic, Balveen! When you have some time, please stop by a piece that I wrote called "Night-Blooming Jasmine." Congratulations, my friend on your sweet win! Pandita Balveen Cheema January 15, 2016 at 9:35 AM Pandita, I surely will do so! I have two of these trees which is so fragrant that passers by even pick up it fallen flowers! Thanks all the same!

James Inman January 9, 2016 at 4:22 PM Lovely poem Balveen. I think we share a true love for flowers. Balveen Cheema January 15, 2016 at 9:36 AM Thanks James! Nice to hear that you also love flowers!

Skat A January 9, 2016 at 3:50 PM Balveen, Congrats on your ACROSTIC POEM... SKAT Balveen Cheema January 15, 2016 at 9:36 AM Thanks Skat!

Sandra Haight January 9, 2016 at 7:28 AM So lovely and romantic, and your poem reads like a soft and fragrant gentle breeze. Congratulations on your placement, Balveen. Hugs, Sandra Balveen Cheema January 9, 2016 at 8:40 AM Thank you so much Sandra dearest!

Connie Marcum Wong January 8, 2016 at 11:41 PM Jasmine has the most glorious scent Balveen. You have outdone yourself in this beautiful romantic tribute! Congratulations on your placement. We have jasmine growing in our front and back yards. #7 Cheers, Connie Balveen Cheema January 9, 2016 at 8:41 AM Oh Connie, how sweetly worded! Thanks ever do much!

Poet Destroyer A January 8, 2016 at 11:22 PM nice win Balveen Cheema January 9, 2016 at 8:42 AM Thanks Linda!

Beautiful Scars January 8, 2016 at 9:24 PM Congrats on your placement :) Balveen Cheema January 9, 2016 at 8:42 AM Thanks Laura!

Andrea Dietrich January 8, 2016 at 9:11 PM Balveen, this has such a charming quality to it. What wonderful imagery. Congrats in my contest. Balveen Cheema January 9, 2016 at 8:43 AM I'm glad you liked it Andrea! Thanks!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 11, 2015 at 9:46 AM Congratulations Balveen. Balveen Cheema December 11, 2015 at 9:50 AM Thanks Nayda!

Skat A December 10, 2015 at 1:21 PM BALVEEN, Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT* Balveen Cheema December 11, 2015 at 3:12 AM Thanks Skat!

Beautiful Scars December 10, 2015 at 11:54 AM Balveen, congrats on your win in the contest! *SMILES* Balveen Cheema December 11, 2015 at 3:15 AM Thanks Laura!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 9, 2015 at 11:02 PM Very wonderful write Balveen.. congrats on great win! Balveen Cheema December 10, 2015 at 7:24 AM Thanks Upma! Love.....

Kp Nunez October 24, 2015 at 6:20 AM Sweet and romantic, how delightful to wake up to this wind! Balveen Cheema October 24, 2015 at 9:50 AM Thank you so much Kim! Thanks for going through my write! Love, Balveen

Andrea Dietrich October 23, 2015 at 8:14 PM beautiful!! Balveen Cheema October 23, 2015 at 10:01 PM Thanks Andrea!