Wind

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Sometimes I wish I Had the strength of wind, to cut Mountains, and dry tears

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John Watt

Date: 4/23/2020 6:56:00 PM

I just noticed many of your early entries at PS were haiku; very nice. Loved this one for the focus on the wind, and the human aspect of wishing you had the power to console the tearful loved one. Touching.

Olajide Oribamise

Date: 5/29/2018 1:18:00 AM

Good

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/6/2018 12:13:00 PM

Profound!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/7/2018 9:31:00 AM

Thank you, so grateful for your comment!

Martins Deep

Date: 3/27/2018 1:36:00 PM

Beautiful soul that you are finds haiku a great way to burst into colours only a beautiful soul can recognise.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/27/2018 2:54:00 PM

Thank you for such a lovely comment, Martins!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/27/2018 1:21:00 PM

Innovative juxtaposition of forces, Michelle! I'm reminded of this axiom of the Sages: "Who is strong? -- The one who rules his/her spirit." So, may it be with us all. Best wishes, Gershon Wolf

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/27/2018 2:59:00 PM

Thank you again - this was inspired by a summer I spent in Montana, where the winds are both forceful and gentle - Michelle