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Wind

I spring alone with forgotten memories and shattered letters, I waltz through every landscape, I leap unendingly, sprinkling imprints of my fondness as rippled dunes and filtered secrets. I am passion and chaos, beauty and power, I jog in hair ice and frost flowers, stroking my lover jealous. I pour out shields of ideas and inspirations, gently on your soul when I fondle through her arms. And when we clash, I become a dust devil, I swirl like Turnado in heights splashing debris into your eyes leading to tumultuous storms.

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FJ Thomas Date: 2/27/2025 11:58:00 AM Your choice of wording could not have more perfectly personified this element. This was a most enjoyable read Tonye. I hope you have been well. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/6/2024 2:13:00 AM - Back with a congratulations in the contest, Tonye :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 4/8/2024 5:29:00 AM Very much appreciated Anne. Thank you.

Tania Kitchin Date: 4/5/2024 7:12:00 PM Tonye, wonderfully penned, enjoyed the imagery, congratulations on your winning placement. Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 4/8/2024 5:29:00 AM Hey Tania, thank you so much.

Christina Bowring Date: 4/5/2024 4:00:00 PM This is a very well written and unique wind personification dear Tonye. ‘ I waltz through every landscape’ ‘ frost flowers’ ‘ dust devil’, splashing debris’ love the imagery here. Very descriptive. Good luck in the contest. Really enjoyed it. Have a great weekend :):) Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 4/8/2024 5:29:00 AM I'm grateful for your lovely comment. Thank you Christina for your visit.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 4/5/2024 2:41:00 AM The wind runs in your heart and it is beautiful. Glad I met you on the soup. Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 4/8/2024 5:28:00 AM Glad I met you too Victor. Thank you for the support.

I Am Anaya Date: 4/4/2024 7:17:00 AM Wind's imagery of changing temperaments is brilliant. Love the way the wind turns according to the lovers emotions! Great personification, Tonye! I Am Anaya Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 4/8/2024 5:27:00 AM I'm glad you felt it. Thank you, Amaya, I appreciate the support.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/3/2024 11:52:00 AM - Personification of the wind really beautifully written, Tonye :) - A winning poem I would like to believe, good luck :) - hugs Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 4/3/2024 12:08:00 PM Thank you Anne. I appreciate your visit.

Karen Jones Date: 4/2/2024 5:50:00 PM Very well done bet you have a winner! Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 4/2/2024 6:16:00 PM Thank you Karen. cheers.

Ink Empress Date: 3/29/2024 2:35:00 AM Dear tonye, you have a very unique way with words, and expressing, so well articulated with such descriptive lines, I especially love “I become a dust devil, I swirl like Turnado in heights splashing debris into your eyes leading to tumultuous storms.” Wow impeccable! Another new fave! Best of luck for the contest Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 3/29/2024 3:51:00 AM Thank you dearest Ink. Loved your exceptional Rain personification. Thank you.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/26/2024 4:56:00 AM You conveyed this with perfection. Best of luck in the contest. I very much enjoyed your poem. Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 3/26/2024 7:58:00 AM Thank you Richard. I appreciate your visit.

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 3/25/2024 9:14:00 AM Hey Tonye, What a powerful and evocative poem! I love how you personify the wind, capturing its contrasting nature. The imagery is stunning – "sprinkling imprints...as rippled dunes," "jogging in hair ice," and the wind as a jealous "lover." The ending with the potential "tumultuous storms" adds a layer of complexity. It feels like the wind represents a powerful force in nature, but also the unpredictable emotions of the human heart. - Blessings, Daniel Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 3/25/2024 9:49:00 AM Yeah, that's it. Very true Daniel. Thank you for visiting.

Valsa George Date: 3/25/2024 8:59:00 AM The gradual growth of wind from a gentle breeze to a storm and tornado is powerfully delineated. "I am passion and chaos, beauty and power," Wind is antithetical with destructive and constructive powers combined within. Powerful personification, once more in your unique style, dear Tonye. Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 3/25/2024 9:48:00 AM You've said it all dear, thank you Valsa. It's a mix of both.

Tom Woody Date: 3/25/2024 8:34:00 AM Haha Mr Wind (or is he a she?) got a bit temperamental at the end. Just like the real thing. Great personification Tonye Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 3/25/2024 9:24:00 AM Lol, Tom you always make me laugh. The wind is a man here. And yes, he really be both sides of the coin. I can testify.

Silent One Date: 3/25/2024 7:34:00 AM Nice take on the personification and I like the human touch you have given to it... You have described it very well.. Best of luck in the contest.. Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 3/25/2024 9:22:00 AM Thank you Silent. I appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/24/2024 8:45:00 PM Wow, one awesome and unique personification of wind. Love it. Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 3/24/2024 8:50:00 PM Thank you Andrea.