Wind

I spring alone with forgotten memories and shattered letters, I waltz through every landscape, I leap unendingly, sprinkling imprints of my fondness as rippled dunes and filtered secrets. I am passion and chaos, beauty and power, I jog in hair ice and frost flowers, stroking my lover jealous. I pour out shields of ideas and inspirations, gently on your soul when I fondle through her arms. And when we clash, I become a dust devil, I swirl like Turnado in heights splashing debris into your eyes leading to tumultuous storms.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2024 2:13:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations in the contest, Tonye :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Tonye George
Date: 4/8/2024 5:29:00 AM

Very much appreciated Anne. Thank you.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/5/2024 7:12:00 PM

Tonye, wonderfully penned, enjoyed the imagery, congratulations on your winning placement.

Tonye George
Date: 4/8/2024 5:29:00 AM

Hey Tania, thank you so much.

Christina Bowring

Date: 4/5/2024 4:00:00 PM

This is a very well written and unique wind personification dear Tonye. ‘ I waltz through every landscape’ ‘ frost flowers’ ‘ dust devil’, splashing debris’ love the imagery here. Very descriptive. Good luck in the contest. Really enjoyed it. Have a great weekend :):)

Tonye George
Date: 4/8/2024 5:29:00 AM

I'm grateful for your lovely comment. Thank you Christina for your visit.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/5/2024 2:41:00 AM

The wind runs in your heart and it is beautiful. Glad I met you on the soup.

Tonye George
Date: 4/8/2024 5:28:00 AM

Glad I met you too Victor. Thank you for the support.

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/4/2024 7:17:00 AM

Wind's imagery of changing temperaments is brilliant. Love the way the wind turns according to the lovers emotions! Great personification, Tonye! I Am Anaya

Tonye George
Date: 4/8/2024 5:27:00 AM

I'm glad you felt it. Thank you, Amaya, I appreciate the support.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/3/2024 11:52:00 AM

- Personification of the wind really beautifully written, Tonye :) - A winning poem I would like to believe, good luck :) - hugs

Tonye George
Date: 4/3/2024 12:08:00 PM

Thank you Anne. I appreciate your visit.

Karen Jones

Date: 4/2/2024 5:50:00 PM

Very well done bet you have a winner!

Tonye George
Date: 4/2/2024 6:16:00 PM

Thank you Karen. cheers.

Ink Empress

Date: 3/29/2024 2:35:00 AM

Dear tonye, you have a very unique way with words, and expressing, so well articulated with such descriptive lines, I especially love “I become a dust devil, I swirl like Turnado in heights splashing debris into your eyes leading to tumultuous storms.” Wow impeccable! Another new fave! Best of luck for the contest

Tonye George
Date: 3/29/2024 3:51:00 AM

Thank you dearest Ink. Loved your exceptional Rain personification. Thank you.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/26/2024 4:56:00 AM

You conveyed this with perfection. Best of luck in the contest. I very much enjoyed your poem.

Tonye George
Date: 3/26/2024 7:58:00 AM

Thank you Richard. I appreciate your visit.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/25/2024 12:22:00 PM

fabulous personification/narrative about the wind. You've created some outstanding images (waltz through every landscape, a dust devil, and tornado splashing debris. I especially liked "I am passion and chaos, beauty and power." Lovely poem; enjoy your day, Sara

Tonye George
Date: 3/25/2024 12:56:00 PM

Thank you Sara. Appreciate it.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/25/2024 9:14:00 AM

Hey Tonye, What a powerful and evocative poem! I love how you personify the wind, capturing its contrasting nature. The imagery is stunning – "sprinkling imprints...as rippled dunes," "jogging in hair ice," and the wind as a jealous "lover." The ending with the potential "tumultuous storms" adds a layer of complexity. It feels like the wind represents a powerful force in nature, but also the unpredictable emotions of the human heart. - Blessings, Daniel

Tonye George
Date: 3/25/2024 9:49:00 AM

Yeah, that's it. Very true Daniel. Thank you for visiting.

Valsa George

Date: 3/25/2024 8:59:00 AM

The gradual growth of wind from a gentle breeze to a storm and tornado is powerfully delineated. "I am passion and chaos, beauty and power," Wind is antithetical with destructive and constructive powers combined within. Powerful personification, once more in your unique style, dear Tonye.

Tonye George
Date: 3/25/2024 9:48:00 AM

You've said it all dear, thank you Valsa. It's a mix of both.