Wind

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ wind blowing whirls around swoosh against us force

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Paige Hind

Date: 3/20/2024 4:56:00 PM

Interesting perspective.- you do well with the wind as a muse!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/20/2024 5:08:00 PM

thanks, Paige...been thinking a lot about the wind, probably because it's windy here...March in Texas :-) have a great evening, Sara

Daniel Caplin

Date: 3/19/2024 10:25:00 PM

Good Morning Sara, you truly do have the most wonderful gift of expressing so much with so few words, the imagery above is also so striking , the desolate landscape , a solitary tree forced by nature to stand tall , fighting all the elements thrust upon it , I see people as trees, and the wind as lifes daily challenges , sometimes we snap and break other times we bounce back that's what your words say to me . Daniel 2 :)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/20/2024 4:06:00 AM

grateful for your visit and your kind and complimentary words. I agree with your thoughts--that people are like trees facing life's daily challenges sometimes breaking and other times flexibly bouncing back. Reminds me of Frost's poem "The Birches." Thank you for time and insights. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/19/2024 1:37:00 PM

Amazing, the force we cannot see…

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/19/2024 5:31:00 PM

I agree...when I walk outside I can feel God's energy...a lovely time of year. Have a pleasant evening & thanks for stopping by, hugs, Sara

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/19/2024 7:24:00 AM

Dear Sara, You are a master at short verse, and I have always enjoyed reading. You are also a master at long verse!! You say things that are amazing words put into poetry. Blessings, my friend! - Daniel

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/19/2024 5:31:00 PM

wow, Daniel, your complimentary words touched me; I'm grateful you see my skill developing in both the long and short forms. I appreciate your visit and your kind words...they mean a great deal to me. Have a blessed evening, Sara

Silpika Kalita

Date: 3/18/2024 5:21:00 PM

Dear Sara, a never tried this poetic form, yet it seems enigmatic in your lines. Thank you. Once yours poems were soup mailed to me. But was away from the site from a long time. So was not able to review. Have a blessed day ahead.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/18/2024 5:36:00 PM

thank you for your visit today, Silpika. I like this form...it's relatively easy for me to do...I like the brevity. Sorry to hear you were away from PS for a while. Hope you can stay. Have a blessed evening. hugs, Sara