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to mark the edge of spring to tilt strawmen 'gainst their will late April wind shuffles new leaves like a deck of cards a simple trick nature in its gliding the willow rustling pushed by the huff and puff of big bad wolf intention a wind that incites the season's freshness rich romp of swaying aspirations warring their swooshing blow of heaving like a magistrate robed wispy clouds wafted away to find other kin as whispers fill night air, thick and thin to hide themselves in willful skies the wind at one's back, a spritely elevation when worry mislays direction when whistles overwash resistance when the wind is weightless like devout contentment you'll hear its chords of song Poem composed April 24, 2023 Revised May 20, 2023

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Date: 5/11/2023 10:32:00 AM
Brian, which line do I pick to highlight?! Your imagery is spot on highlighting your underlying theme with perfection's touch! Wonderful metaphorically and visually rich! This is a winner. And a fav for me! All the best. Cheers. Blessings.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/11/2023 11:37:00 AM
Greetings Sam, Your supportive words are much appreciated. Imagery, metaphor are sometimes a struggle to convey precise meaning. You certainly set a high standard in your fine writing, Sam. Best wishes always, Brian
Date: 4/29/2023 1:36:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work being on the contest list. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/29/2023 2:46:00 PM
You are most thoughtful, Sara, to voice congratulatory merit for the piece as it was quite far down the list of placements. With appreciation, Brian
Date: 4/27/2023 2:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a great/blessed day..............
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/27/2023 2:34:00 PM
Hello Paula, Very thoughtful of you to visit + send congratulations on my small poem. Sincerest regards always, Brian
Date: 4/27/2023 1:02:00 PM
Brian, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/27/2023 2:33:00 PM
Thanks very much for the 2nd place acknowledgement. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 4/26/2023 10:17:00 AM
Wonderful use of imagery and alliteration in your poem, Brian! Enjoyed this very much and good luck in the contest! :)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/26/2023 12:03:00 PM
Greetings Laura, Most thoughtful of you to view my work in such a positive light. Poetic devices (as you mention) are not always valued however.I hope that you're well. Sincerely, Brian
Date: 4/25/2023 11:46:00 PM
So many good writers on this site. =) Thanks again for dropping by my page. Cliff
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/26/2023 5:47:00 AM
Hello Clifford, thank you for reading my small posting. I hope that all is well with you. Cheers, Brian
Date: 4/25/2023 12:38:00 PM
Another superb write Brian. Nature in all its glory captured and personified by the pen of a very skilled writer. Cheers - Gary
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/25/2023 1:00:00 PM
Thanks very much Gary. My skill needs some improving but thank goodness for the edit option. You are most thoughtful in your supportive note. I hope that you are well. Cheers Brian
Date: 4/25/2023 8:32:00 AM
This is a very entertainig read, Brian. You write with a natural ease, easily evident when reading. Really nice! Sorry i took so long to come around. I will keep checking back:)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/25/2023 1:04:00 PM
Hello Daniel, i appreciate your stop by and affirmative note. Your portfolio contains many gems. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 4/25/2023 3:54:00 AM
I really like the last two lines. Sometimes the wind even makes us feel weightless when it is pushing against up so hard. I do enjoy hearing the windchimes being blown. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/25/2023 6:06:00 AM
Thanks very much Sara. I did struggle with the poem and may do revision yet. Fortunately our postings are never static - the edit button is at hand. With appreciation for your comment, Brian

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