Wind

to mark the edge of spring
to tilt strawmen 'gainst their will
late April wind shuffles new leaves like a deck of cards
a simple trick
nature in its gliding

the willow rustling
pushed by the huff and puff of big bad wolf intention
a wind that incites the season's freshness
rich romp of swaying
aspirations warring
their swooshing blow of heaving like a magistrate robed

wispy clouds wafted away to find other kin
as whispers fill night air, thick and thin
to hide themselves in willful skies

the wind at one's back, a spritely elevation
when worry mislays direction
when whistles overwash resistance 
when the wind is weightless like devout contentment
you'll hear its chords of song



Poem composed April 24, 2023
Revised May 20, 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kauffman Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 10:32 AM
Brian, which line do I pick to highlight?! Your imagery is spot on highlighting your underlying theme with perfection's touch! Wonderful metaphorically and visually rich! This is a winner. And a fav for me! All the best. Cheers. Blessings.
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May 11, 2023 at 11:37 AM
Greetings Sam, Your supportive words are much appreciated. Imagery, metaphor are sometimes a struggle to convey precise meaning. You certainly set a high standard in your fine writing, Sam. Best wishes always, Brian
Kendrick Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 1:36 PM
Congratulations on this winning work being on the contest list. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
Sambourne Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 2:46 PM
You are most thoughtful, Sara, to voice congratulatory merit for the piece as it was quite far down the list of placements. With appreciation, Brian
Goldsmith Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 2:28 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a great/blessed day..............
Sambourne Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 2:34 PM
Hello Paula, Very thoughtful of you to visit + send congratulations on my small poem. Sincerest regards always, Brian
La France Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 1:02 PM
Brian, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Sambourne Avatar
April 27, 2023 at 2:33 PM
Thanks very much for the 2nd place acknowledgement. Best wishes, Brian
Leiser Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 10:17 AM
Wonderful use of imagery and alliteration in your poem, Brian! Enjoyed this very much and good luck in the contest! :)
Sambourne Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 12:03 PM
Greetings Laura, Most thoughtful of you to view my work in such a positive light. Poetic devices (as you mention) are not always valued however.I hope that you're well. Sincerely, Brian
Villalon Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 11:46 PM
So many good writers on this site. =) Thanks again for dropping by my page. Cliff
Sambourne Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 5:47 AM
Hello Clifford, thank you for reading my small posting. I hope that all is well with you. Cheers, Brian
Radice Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 12:38 PM
Another superb write Brian. Nature in all its glory captured and personified by the pen of a very skilled writer. Cheers - Gary
Sambourne Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 1:00 PM
Thanks very much Gary. My skill needs some improving but thank goodness for the edit option. You are most thoughtful in your supportive note. I hope that you are well. Cheers Brian
Turner Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 8:32 AM
This is a very entertainig read, Brian. You write with a natural ease, easily evident when reading. Really nice! Sorry i took so long to come around. I will keep checking back:)
Sambourne Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 1:04 PM
Hello Daniel, i appreciate your stop by and affirmative note. Your portfolio contains many gems. Best wishes, Brian
Kendrick Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 3:54 AM
I really like the last two lines. Sometimes the wind even makes us feel weightless when it is pushing against up so hard. I do enjoy hearing the windchimes being blown. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
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April 25, 2023 at 6:06 AM
Thanks very much Sara. I did struggle with the poem and may do revision yet. Fortunately our postings are never static - the edit button is at hand. With appreciation for your comment, Brian
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