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Wind

I love the wind Blowing softly against my face, Fanning it on a hot Summer’s day, Stirring my hair; Making the branches and leaves quiver And the grasses to dance and sway, And all the while Whispering a soothing melody If one but listens intently. I hate the wind Roaring violently, Making the branches and leaves fall, Bending the grasses till they break, Whipping the dust around That stings the eyes, Finding its way through nooks and crannies, And whistling an eerie tune Auguring a storm. I’m scared of the wind Blasting at everything in its path, Causing whole trees to tumble, And flattening grass, blossoms, and all; Generating huge waves That claw their way to shore; Crumpling poles, posts, and walls, Howling and shrieking like a banshee, And snatching the life of the unwary. April 23, 2023 Writing Challenge - ‘W’ Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 5/19/2023 7:33:00 PM
Thank you all for the kind and wonderful words!
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Date: 5/19/2023 4:33:00 PM
Very well expressed, Ryan, in a piece highlighting a layered look at the wind. Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 4/27/2023 12:08:00 PM
Ryan, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, congratulations !
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Date: 4/27/2023 6:45:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely win poem, Ryan :) - hugs
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Date: 4/27/2023 3:59:00 AM
A very descriptive and emotive work found here on the winner's list. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 4/23/2023 10:58:00 PM
Different forms of the wind beautifully depicted, Ryan:)
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Date: 4/23/2023 10:52:00 AM
I like this one, expressed the different forms the wind takes or perhaps different levels of resilience in different days
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