L Milton Hankins Poet Free verse

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[I think this poem may have been inspired by seeing the number of wilted flower arrangements at funerals I conducted as a young pastor. It was written about the mid-1960s. I included it in my first poetry chapbook, "The Lady in the Pink Hat," Candor Press, 1969.]

Wilted

Rancid lilies stream the rim
     of wicker baskets
     like wilted soldiers rank and file
Fatigued and sweaty
They salute a mournful throng
     with dampened pistols
     and burnished brass.
Hate every passion screaming
     for a drink of water
     in the searing heat of attention.
Stack their arms and fall
     in blessed oblivion.

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Brian Sambourne May 30, 2021 at 10:58 AM Incredibly powerful poem, Milton. It is worth several re-reads to appreciate the fine, crisp imagery. The symbolic power of wilted flowers with the link to soldiers is poetry at its best. Sincerest regards, Brian L Milton Hankins May 30, 2021 at 11:00 AM Brian, your thoughtful words are so appreciated. Thanks so much for coming by to read and leave a note.

Gershon Wolf May 29, 2021 at 9:02 PM Superb poesy, Milt. I can just feel those limp blooms... Now don't get too mad at me for this tongue-in-cheek 'brainstorm,' BUT what if you turned the first letter of the title of this poem upside down? ~ Just sayin' (and prayin' you'll won't excommunicate me). ~ gw L Milton Hankins May 29, 2021 at 9:44 PM Ah...very clever, G.W. Very clever, indeed. BTW, do you know what "milt" is? Most people don't, so I tell them that's how they can remember my name. I know you're going to look it up now! G.W. I would NEVER excommunicate you!

Sotto Poet May 29, 2021 at 12:05 PM It is an excellent Poem to remember the true meaning of Memorial Day and honor those who died defending freedom. Unfortunately, many of the young generations don't know anything about it besides getting another day off. L Milton Hankins May 29, 2021 at 12:52 PM So true, Lasaad. But, I think it is an opportunity for teaching. An important opportunity, I must add.