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Willow tree

I used to imagine stepping off the shingles of my childhood home Thought it might be poetic To end it Where it started While perched there Peaking over Waiting for the wind to catch me right I caught a glimpse of my old willow tree My dad had planted it for me I watched it grow So slow Still small now Has so much left to go I used to dream of climbing it one day When it was big And strong And bright I think one day I still might Maybe life’s worth more than my brains on the pavement Maybe my life’s worth more

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Date: 3/4/2025 8:30:00 PM
I love this, it’s eerily comforting
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Date: 3/5/2025 4:01:00 AM
Haha yes thank you
Date: 3/4/2025 7:26:00 AM
I've felt that way myself many a time. Good to know I'm not alone. Thank you! I like the poem.
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Date: 3/5/2025 4:01:00 AM
Thank you for commenting! You’re never alone
Date: 3/3/2025 4:34:00 PM
Great piece Thanks for sharing your work. I see the willow tree as the ideas and knowledge your dad may have shared with you. Hopefully' those came handy when you needed them
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Date: 3/3/2025 5:22:00 PM
Yes for sure, thank you for commenting
Date: 2/23/2025 3:46:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2025 4:59:00 AM
Good poem Jillian. Your life is worth more.
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