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Willow

In his arms I am free to explore the oceans ~ openly caste my gaze 'pon stars twinkling in the midnight skies; his hand gently caressed my face, as willow wept her tears 'pon the winds ~ From wind a genteel sigh of reprieve is released as tender droplets of precious rain, and honeysuckles wantonly bloom 'pon receiving them -- And Aye, I am free to explore the oceans and more, in his arms I have found both ecstasy and tranquility For he is the hearth of my home...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/21/2012 10:03:00 PM
Adell,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 11/10/2010 10:39:00 AM
impressed the way you lay it for him" love it ( Lin~Ra )
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Date: 11/3/2010 1:39:00 PM
Very romantically expressed, Adell. comparing love to ocean is awesome. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/8/2010 6:00:00 PM
This poem is so truly lovely. It's like a soft, gentle breeze upon the skin. The words create a cherished moment as it speaks so dulcetly. It reminds me of keltic legends, ancient vows and romantic visions. Very warm in passion and cool in colorful artistry ... A masterpiece ... MoonBee
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Date: 10/3/2010 7:22:00 AM
Nice use of imagery and words in this poem, Adell! So often people cannot express their feelengs! Well done!...Gert:)
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Date: 9/28/2010 6:07:00 PM
Interesting perspective and use of language. Creative imagery. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 9/27/2010 1:40:00 PM
Such a romantic and loving write..To be so loved by another is grand...thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 9/27/2010 12:02:00 PM
What creative imagery and great use of metaphor with the sea, Adell. You ar very lucky to have someone in whose arms you find happiness and comfort. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/27/2010 8:35:00 AM
A pleasure to read your creative poetry today Adell. I am hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2010 8:29:00 AM
Well expressed thoughts on willow, Adell
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