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Willow (2)

Loose green tendrils hanging low, kiss the soft green earth, the bough kneels with the wind as if in prayer, a penitent so humble and predictable, and just the same as others of its kind; a pliant bow that's unreleased, yet like to spring to heaven with a wish, a stately, monumental king of meadow and a murmuring stream, in haze conceal'd, a misty dream, a graceful monolith 'twould seem, cloaked in a blue-grey hush.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/20/2008 3:40:00 PM
"Willows" Kind of a sensitive, pastoral fantasy. Makes one want to spread a blanket on a warm day and dream away. Enjoyed mucho. Love, daver
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Date: 12/20/2008 7:18:00 AM
beautiful! dear Keith. Love, Lainie Warmest wishes to you and yours during this Festivel season of celebration.
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Date: 12/19/2008 4:14:00 PM
This is wonderful. The imagery is fantasic!!! A lighthearted feeling to this. It leaves the reader with an uplifting feeling. You really have a wonderful way with words. Great write, lovely. Love Robin
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Date: 12/19/2008 2:12:00 PM
Oh man, you are so gifted and talented, Keith! You find beauty in many places, and you're able not just to see it, but to open it up its doors to others. Interesting finish, the last line is like a button holding the whole piece together. I'd like to apologize for the dummie 'emperor' comment. I only wished for you to smile. Anyhow..I hope you have a great weekend..many smiles and much kindness! God bless you and yours..Love, Mikki
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