Will You Marry Me ?

Sky weeps, I was collecting clouds
from stillness of the sea.
A snake again wants to kiss,
I am learning to die
in arms of spiral mirrors.

Cannot forgot the cheating of umbrellas.
The stings, the twists, the hollow breads.
Foams are submitting the  venoms
on golden plates.
I grieve for the dignity of a hangman.

The retreat leaves the blood
on the stones. My house was burning.
Will you marry me ? I ask the dew
sitting on the grass. Don’t go
back to the sun.

A relentless bucket fills up, again
I am  watching at  the moon.
The icy sand, the fire, the heat.
Flowers will hunt the thorns
at rooftops of sleep.

SATISH VERMA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 5/23/2009 11:25:00 PM
Satish, congrats with this amazing feature this week...Raul
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Date: 5/23/2009 3:57:00 PM
Congrats Satish on "Will You Marry Me?" being featured. Vince
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Date: 5/23/2009 5:28:00 AM
Delightful poem, congrats on being featured, James
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Date: 5/22/2009 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep writing, Love and Hugs, Dane
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Date: 5/20/2009 9:19:00 AM
Satish, you are such a great poet… I love the imageries… this piece is good. Keep writing… thanks for sharing this Congrats on a well deserved feature.
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Date: 5/18/2009 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/18/2009 3:14:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Best wishes.
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Date: 5/18/2009 12:04:00 AM
Satish, congratulations on your beautiful poetry being featured this week. Ernilando
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Date: 5/17/2009 5:34:00 PM
The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in a powerful way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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